If it hasn't been because of work and personnal life, i would already have finished this chapter three or four month prior from now. This one was quite the challenge, hope it was worth the wait for those who are invested in the story. I'll try to do the same amount but in less time, no promises tho.
However, i still have to do better for the dialogs and try to find a fitting title.
I also did a sneaky update for the Prologue and Chapter 1 of the story, *tweaking the spacing of the text to make it easier on the eye and give the reader more room to breath so to speak.
I'd like to thanks anybody reading the story and following it, more is coming and is already being written.
And a thanks thrown into the wind for all the writers amateur here and elsewhere that gave me inspiration to do better in my project. One is more specific for someone than for the others since it's a callout of one of his work i put in the chapter. Let's see if the noodle can find it.
Thanks to
Thesociallyawkwardpinguin for accepting to try his hand on drawing the commissions as comic pages. The art was supposed to be set in the first half of the chapter, but a change of composition gave me the perfect opportunity for a conclusion and following the next chapter. The setting belongs to him, if you got any question you should go and ask him directly.
Thanks to
Zebreva for his invaluable help, by taking his personnal time to crank up the quality of the story to a level i can't achieve alone just yet. I still need time to practice before writing something with quality by my lonesome.
However, i still have to do better for the dialogs and try to find a fitting title.
I also did a sneaky update for the Prologue and Chapter 1 of the story, *tweaking the spacing of the text to make it easier on the eye and give the reader more room to breath so to speak.
I'd like to thanks anybody reading the story and following it, more is coming and is already being written.
And a thanks thrown into the wind for all the writers amateur here and elsewhere that gave me inspiration to do better in my project. One is more specific for someone than for the others since it's a callout of one of his work i put in the chapter. Let's see if the noodle can find it.
Thanks to
Thesociallyawkwardpinguin for accepting to try his hand on drawing the commissions as comic pages. The art was supposed to be set in the first half of the chapter, but a change of composition gave me the perfect opportunity for a conclusion and following the next chapter. The setting belongs to him, if you got any question you should go and ask him directly. Thanks to
Zebreva for his invaluable help, by taking his personnal time to crank up the quality of the story to a level i can't achieve alone just yet. I still need time to practice before writing something with quality by my lonesome.
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Hello there! It's my fault i'm not a very talkative on the account, but yes i'm still working on my story. I won't bore you with the useless details of my life but i can say that i've been hit by a urge of editings during the creation of chapter four and that it slowed down the overall process, I don't want to make promises as of when it will be done, but soonish is close enough. So when the next chapter will be done i'll also updated all the other chapters before with newer and cleaner text. Hope it helps :D
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