FA+
Shop
588
Views
Views
0
Favorites
Favorites
Category
Story / Transformation
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120
File Size 78.5 kB
Report this content
★
More from FGM01
Listed in Folders
Perchance to Dream 27 - Conviction
Tensions come to a boil as Marion attempts to talk the Epiphany down, before Isaac slaughters them all.
Mood Music - Battle at Journey's End
Highly recommended. It's a good one.
Whew! This chapter. I wibbled and waffled on it for so long. I knew that there would be a clash of heads between Epiphany and Treehouse, but the idea of them just fighting it out didn't seem right. On the other hand, NOT having a fight would be rather unsatisfying. I spent a good bit of time helping my editor back on his feet so he could ponder the chapter with me, and in the end I think this is a nice resolution.
In a video game form, Azar would be the climax, the finishing blow against the decay and falling down. Yet here, I feel having the climax be a battle of meaning and reason, something fought with opinion and passion makes it far more interesting and enjoyable.
In any case, this is probably the chapter I'm most proud of, so I hope you enjoy. If you want more transformation related antics, I have an open YCH to try and help pay the bills over here! Thank you to everyone who can help.
EDIT: Slight addition to the climax, since it did feel a bit short. *spews words* 2 more paragraphs for you, freshly regurgitated.
Mood Music - Battle at Journey's End
Highly recommended. It's a good one.
Whew! This chapter. I wibbled and waffled on it for so long. I knew that there would be a clash of heads between Epiphany and Treehouse, but the idea of them just fighting it out didn't seem right. On the other hand, NOT having a fight would be rather unsatisfying. I spent a good bit of time helping my editor back on his feet so he could ponder the chapter with me, and in the end I think this is a nice resolution.
In a video game form, Azar would be the climax, the finishing blow against the decay and falling down. Yet here, I feel having the climax be a battle of meaning and reason, something fought with opinion and passion makes it far more interesting and enjoyable.
In any case, this is probably the chapter I'm most proud of, so I hope you enjoy. If you want more transformation related antics, I have an open YCH to try and help pay the bills over here! Thank you to everyone who can help.
EDIT: Slight addition to the climax, since it did feel a bit short. *spews words* 2 more paragraphs for you, freshly regurgitated.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 78.5 kB
Listed in Folders
i've got a question if i may ask one. there is a story you've made, or is at least in your style and starts in the fortress of minds or something similar, its about a dragon trying to get out and he's faced by mirrors which each cause a different change or have a different effect..at one point his gender even get changed.do you now the name of that story since i am looking for it and really liked it, like most of your other stories which are very well made (p.s sorry for my bad english, its not my first language.
Comments