Oh, Ash's face in the last panel...!

:O wow! x3

Heh, deja-vu. Maybe it's all a dream in a dream! Naaaah...

Still, now I really want to see the next page to see what happens next.

awesome <3

Did he get smaller?

You could say that he's about to START getting smaller.

But in all seriousness, it was probably the angles in the last pages that confused you.

I think it was more the angle in page 18. He was quite large in that one. Which is sort of what I like.

Well, I'm sorry if this has disappointed you. I cannot make every page perfect (at least not to everybody's tastes). It's proving difficult after how long this has been going.

ha, you haven't disappointed me in the slightest; I simply don't like giving artists blanket praise. I like to give artsits something to think about, constructive criticism. It doesn't always come across with the sort of jaunty flair I possess in real life, but I do assure you its what I mean, and I'm also quite curious about how this is going. And don't forget that there's a commission when this is over ;)

I understand that, and I appreciate good constructive criticism; however, what you said sounded more in the lines of "It was like this before and now it's like this and it is not really what I like."

I don't assume that pieces are made specifically for me. Actually this one is specifically made for someone else, isn't it? And it's true that the former is more what I like, but I said that more to explain my own position (and to give you ideas for the upcoming commission ) than to dictate what you should have or should not have done. I do like this piece and I guess I didn't understand the change in size and angles relative to not being able to see Ash's whole body. It's more I'm trying to wrap my mind around how big he is and where his stomach is on his body, which may well be my own fault as anything else.

Hehe, lovely. I would pass out too if some kitsy randomly jumped down my throat! lol