That's really cute Kazzy ^

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^ I loved it. Great stanza organization and it was appealing to the eye.

I think you would like to do beat poetry- free flowing
kinda like the ones I did for my poetry assignment

Thank you, vinny *hugs*
.... You see, I just jotted this down in half an hour with very rough organization. I put no thought into stanzas.

Beat poetry... Sounds groovy. and, no, I don't mean GROOVY. xD

see, this is where I'd love to se you do some more slant and inner rhymes instead of the A B C B style of poetry that seems a bit too confined for you ^^
Remember- poetry doesn't have to rhyme, just look and sound appealing. When you write a poem read it outlous to yourself because often your ear catches problems you eye won't ^^

GODDAMN! xD It is, I love beat and modern poetry. Paul Vermersch is a great poet you might like him.

Could be interesting... But this is what I am comfortable with at the moment. However, I shall try some of that awesome freaky stuff when I'm not tired out of my skull.

GROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVY I will check it out lator

Good plan ^^