

He had the bass lines bouncing around in his head for awhile. Here are the original snipits. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4039525
That eventually became this.
It's very somba and hopefully danceable.
Lyrics:
can you make it real?
can you take it to the highest places
can you cop a feel?
can you shake it in the driest faces
it comes undone
the last is one
it comes undone
the smoking gun
let out your soul and feed the fire
taking the place of whole desire
smile on this earth and raise the choir
can’t fade away
we’re bringin’ it back today
st-st-st-stroke em if ya got em
interlude
will you shred the fake
will you turn on the light and make it better
will you give the take
will you jingle and jive to try and get her
pre-chorus and chorus
Solo
Chorus
Category Music / Rock
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 87 x 120px
File Size 4.37 MB
Schwing! This is great, and not only because you get your mandolin broken in two =D
Oh, yes this is very danceable, I should know I practically only write dances (though they are undanceable).
I've grown fond of your pepper choir, and I think I know of a cool "live" solution that doesn't require extra singers.
Damn my loive for baroque and renaissance music, for some reason I feel like at the chorus' (right?) third line "smile on this earth and raise the choir" there should be another part starting really softly and growing louder towards the end singing "raise the choir" or something. It wouldn't really work in rock though, and thank goodness you didn't do it (the professional critics would probably applaud you if you did, maybe.)
Oh, and I adore the choral section at 2.17 to 2.27, simply stunning!
Loved it~
Oh, yes this is very danceable, I should know I practically only write dances (though they are undanceable).
I've grown fond of your pepper choir, and I think I know of a cool "live" solution that doesn't require extra singers.
Damn my loive for baroque and renaissance music, for some reason I feel like at the chorus' (right?) third line "smile on this earth and raise the choir" there should be another part starting really softly and growing louder towards the end singing "raise the choir" or something. It wouldn't really work in rock though, and thank goodness you didn't do it (the professional critics would probably applaud you if you did, maybe.)
Oh, and I adore the choral section at 2.17 to 2.27, simply stunning!
Loved it~
oh man.... that falsetto yelling took alot of... yelling X3
then shia hit the highest one cause I couldn't and damn am I grateful.
thanks so much!
can you tell I don't know how to play the mandolin? shia had been just messing around with the tuning pegs and what was a barr .... yeah.... hahaha
then shia hit the highest one cause I couldn't and damn am I grateful.
thanks so much!
can you tell I don't know how to play the mandolin? shia had been just messing around with the tuning pegs and what was a barr .... yeah.... hahaha
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