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After being on a troublemaking streak with the younger kids, Umbreon learns to change his ways with the help of a certain legendary Pokémon and a rather bizarre punishment.
Thumbnail art drawn by me. Larger version of the picture can be found here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/42745908/
Thumbnail art drawn by me. Larger version of the picture can be found here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/42745908/
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Pokemon
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File Size 32.1 kB
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This story gave me a whole new appreciation for CELEBI. The whimsical whims of the tiny, yet powerful, legendary Pokemon felt spot on for what I, personally, felt would fit it. (I watched Pokemon 4Ever when I had eyesight and can't say I was overly impressed with CELEBI and its link with time. It did save the forest, but it is such an impish Pokemon that, truly, I think the behavior in your story is far more fitting.)
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The way the story progressed did well in showing how reluctant the UMBREON was to curtail their derogatory behavior. The CELEBI did not go straight to putting UMBREON into diapers. Instead it gave plenty of chances and ample warnings prior to really twisting time and giving UMBREON a lesson that they took to heart and used to apologize to those he wronged while giving CELEBI due credit for helping him break the cycle of 1st graders bullying Kindergartners.
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I was impressed by just how much it took to get the message through to UMBREON. Once the pacifier was stuck in his mouth, I felt that would've been the point they realized they needed to rethink partaking in the unfriendly tradition of bullying under classman. Though there are plenty of real life situations that a punishment fails to generate the response of seeing beyond one's self. By having UMBREON transferred into Kindergarten, openly acknowledged for not being potty trained, messing himself in front of the entire class, and being denied the opportunity to play outside in lieu of being stuck by himself in a bouncer finally got the message through. Plus, if I remember right, CELEBI fixed the timeline so that all the shameful situations it put UMBREON through were not remembered by anyone at school. Having the shaming be exclusive to UMBREON shows a degree of fairness and how the lesson was not meant to punish him as much as get him to think beyond himself and the cruel standards set forth by past generations of upper classman.
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The way the story progressed did well in showing how reluctant the UMBREON was to curtail their derogatory behavior. The CELEBI did not go straight to putting UMBREON into diapers. Instead it gave plenty of chances and ample warnings prior to really twisting time and giving UMBREON a lesson that they took to heart and used to apologize to those he wronged while giving CELEBI due credit for helping him break the cycle of 1st graders bullying Kindergartners.
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I was impressed by just how much it took to get the message through to UMBREON. Once the pacifier was stuck in his mouth, I felt that would've been the point they realized they needed to rethink partaking in the unfriendly tradition of bullying under classman. Though there are plenty of real life situations that a punishment fails to generate the response of seeing beyond one's self. By having UMBREON transferred into Kindergarten, openly acknowledged for not being potty trained, messing himself in front of the entire class, and being denied the opportunity to play outside in lieu of being stuck by himself in a bouncer finally got the message through. Plus, if I remember right, CELEBI fixed the timeline so that all the shameful situations it put UMBREON through were not remembered by anyone at school. Having the shaming be exclusive to UMBREON shows a degree of fairness and how the lesson was not meant to punish him as much as get him to think beyond himself and the cruel standards set forth by past generations of upper classman.
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