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Just a bit of rhythmic brevity on an old topic: lightning. =3
I think I've grown poetically quite a bit, since my first few posts on FA; I've been choosing my words better, and am expressing my ideas in a more comprehensible, yet still uniquely creative, manner. In short, I've learned not to clutter my poems. ^^;
Consider this poem a brief, consolidated revision of this --> http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2634382/
I hope you all enjoy this revisited idea! =D
Until next poem!
I think I've grown poetically quite a bit, since my first few posts on FA; I've been choosing my words better, and am expressing my ideas in a more comprehensible, yet still uniquely creative, manner. In short, I've learned not to clutter my poems. ^^;
Consider this poem a brief, consolidated revision of this --> http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2634382/
I hope you all enjoy this revisited idea! =D
Until next poem!
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MISSION COMPLETE! ;D
I'm glad to be receiving such positive feedback on this revision. I really do think I've grown a lot; I'd like to continue expressing my creativity in the best manner possible! \(^o^)/
And that means removing the cluttering imagery. =O
Many thanks, Rai. ^^
I'm glad to be receiving such positive feedback on this revision. I really do think I've grown a lot; I'd like to continue expressing my creativity in the best manner possible! \(^o^)/
And that means removing the cluttering imagery. =O
Many thanks, Rai. ^^
That's absolutley brilliant!!
The flow, you're word choice, clever perspective!! My god!! Thank you for posting this xD
I love how you used "Stained like windows in a church, the night must be in pane:" My favorite part of the poem. It actually brought a smile to my face with that connection.
Well done as always D-tail!
The flow, you're word choice, clever perspective!! My god!! Thank you for posting this xD
I love how you used "Stained like windows in a church, the night must be in pane:" My favorite part of the poem. It actually brought a smile to my face with that connection.
Well done as always D-tail!
"My god!!" ? (o.o)
Wow, that's quite the interjection, Nick! D8
Don't get me wrong, I'm very happy to hear it, just wasn't expecting it. x3
And I brought a smile to your face, you say? Well THAT'S a (MISSION ACCOMPLISHED) for sure! But yes, that is one of my favorite lines as well. ^^
Thank you very much for your comment, Nick! =)
Wow, that's quite the interjection, Nick! D8
Don't get me wrong, I'm very happy to hear it, just wasn't expecting it. x3
And I brought a smile to your face, you say? Well THAT'S a (MISSION ACCOMPLISHED) for sure! But yes, that is one of my favorite lines as well. ^^
Thank you very much for your comment, Nick! =)
That's a fascinating and telling comparison. I can't wrap my head around how your skill might possibly improve beyond this a year down the road, but I surely look forward to finding out!
And touche, sir, you've done far better justice to lightning in your treatment of the phenomenon :D Words trump fancy Photoshop effects every time (indeed, now the notion of a little green lizard skating down the razor edge of shattered glass feels like an even more epic scene)!
And touche, sir, you've done far better justice to lightning in your treatment of the phenomenon :D Words trump fancy Photoshop effects every time (indeed, now the notion of a little green lizard skating down the razor edge of shattered glass feels like an even more epic scene)!
Well, I won't lie, for such a surprisingly brief piece, I'm rather proud of it. =3
Haha, and I would very much like to write more (excuse my French) kickass poetry down the road! :D
Lastly, it would seem you have removed your ornamental helm as an act of modesty. I suppose I shall not slight this gesture of kindness, even though I still find your own visual rendition to be rather refreshing. ^^
Haha, and I would very much like to write more (excuse my French) kickass poetry down the road! :D
Lastly, it would seem you have removed your ornamental helm as an act of modesty. I suppose I shall not slight this gesture of kindness, even though I still find your own visual rendition to be rather refreshing. ^^
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