The finished version of an earlier posted poem; I made a few minor changes here and there, just altering a few words, but all in all I liked the rough draft enough that nothing's really changed.

I've got a journal with the message behind this poem posted up so that I don't spoil the message for anyone; if you'd like to post what you think it meant and check the journal, that's great n.n if you want to post your thoughts but don't check the journal, that's fine too! In the end, a poem means what the reader takes form it, despite what the writer intends...

Constructive criticism is encouraged, praise is welcome, but if you're going to degrade my work without saying anything constructive then get the FUCK out.