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Having conquered the second of the Midgar siblings, Skyler now finds himself adjusting to the increase of magic that swells within. To sate the immediate hunger, he devours all of Mina's magically-enchanted mud, filling out his clothes a bit better. Now, with Nick's help, he heads down to meet back up with the girls.
One of a few chapters that I've recently been writing like mad. Enjoy! :) Comments are appreciated, definitely. Oh, and expect these to come in weekly.
~ KT
One of a few chapters that I've recently been writing like mad. Enjoy! :) Comments are appreciated, definitely. Oh, and expect these to come in weekly.
~ KT
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nghtmarefenix
~nghtmarefenix
A very...interesting story to say the least. Good but definitely interesting. Eager to read the next chapter.
kuddlykt
~kuddlykt
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Thank you. I intended it to be interesting, but I hope there weren't some parts that were too confusing. That's my ever-present worry surrounding this story.
Kcool100
~kcool100
This is an awesome story so far, but there might be a small error. About two thirds into it, you wrote ' the tea pot soaked in the tea bags.' I think it would be the other way around! ;'D
kuddlykt
~kuddlykt
OP
Yep, you're right. Guess I was going a bit too fast there and misplaced what item was where. Thanks for finding it, and thank you for the compliment on the story.
Kcool100
~kcool100
Your welcome! Your stories deserve compliments. :'D
Kinshou-fox
~kinshou-fox
Mm....being controlled by the magic WOULD seem like quite the detriment. Regardless, it's at least somewhat nice to see that his former opponent is still acting nice and whatnot. Though I don't trust the others to behave in a similar fashion. XD *can completely envision this working like some sort of Action/RPG game*
kuddlykt
~kuddlykt
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I know, right?! That's what I keep imagining when I write this. The handling is definitely more obvious when you get to the next boss scene.
Kinshou-fox
~kinshou-fox
Goody. XP
