for approval approval @w@
OMG next time when someone sent me 2.5k texts for a commission info I am going to charge A LOT of extra fee >w<
reading is just a nightmare to a silly pup that don't read much......
just hope I didn't miss too many details behind.... >.>"
*cries and runz away o>w<o*
OMG next time when someone sent me 2.5k texts for a commission info I am going to charge A LOT of extra fee >w<
reading is just a nightmare to a silly pup that don't read much......
just hope I didn't miss too many details behind.... >.>"
*cries and runz away o>w<o*
Category Designs / Portraits
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 1116 x 1200px
File Size 489 kB
Looking good so far! not to be a nit pick but the thumb toe is a bit too low. Raise it up. Think of your hand on its digits only, palm raised, thats the way my feet are. The thumb toe should be raised in a similar fassion, about 1/3 up the digitigrade leg, like a dewclaw. the 3 main toes should splay out like a bird's front toes, and should be longer with more talon like claws, think fingers instead of toes.
And a common thing, the semi serpentine lower body :V I know its very different and hard to picture. (I can give you more money if this is a lot to change x.o) but the torso flows into the tail between the legs. And my fursona dont have a butt, so no cheeks. the wider hip makes it so an ass doesnt form. ^^ let me dig up some image thats similar, its hard for me to explain ya know, and send you a link in a note.
The hair ( I know I am picking out stupid things ) is a bit wrong, strand the bangs more in in clumps (Think Cloud from FFVII) and the shorter hair running down the head between the ears as a mohawk, gelled up like a ^ shape. The bangs are too floofy on the top of the head, its mohawk with extended bangs over the right eye, the extended gelled bangs should go low, about lower chin length on the right side of the muzzle, the bangs that are on the left side should only be because the muzzle seperated them, those should go to the bridge of the nose.
Arm colors too, just noticed, I dunno if its just cause its unfinished, but wanna note the colors of the arms are that dark brownish blackish redish color, kinda like a burgandy, the seperation of the color is like a red fox's black arms.
Otherwise, really good! I do not mind waiting longer for it while corrections are made. TBH I am impressed, the tail looks great :D
And a common thing, the semi serpentine lower body :V I know its very different and hard to picture. (I can give you more money if this is a lot to change x.o) but the torso flows into the tail between the legs. And my fursona dont have a butt, so no cheeks. the wider hip makes it so an ass doesnt form. ^^ let me dig up some image thats similar, its hard for me to explain ya know, and send you a link in a note.
The hair ( I know I am picking out stupid things ) is a bit wrong, strand the bangs more in in clumps (Think Cloud from FFVII) and the shorter hair running down the head between the ears as a mohawk, gelled up like a ^ shape. The bangs are too floofy on the top of the head, its mohawk with extended bangs over the right eye, the extended gelled bangs should go low, about lower chin length on the right side of the muzzle, the bangs that are on the left side should only be because the muzzle seperated them, those should go to the bridge of the nose.
Arm colors too, just noticed, I dunno if its just cause its unfinished, but wanna note the colors of the arms are that dark brownish blackish redish color, kinda like a burgandy, the seperation of the color is like a red fox's black arms.
Otherwise, really good! I do not mind waiting longer for it while corrections are made. TBH I am impressed, the tail looks great :D
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