good poem you did *hugs you alot*

I feel displacement and passion in this poem. Makes me think someone is longing something, possibly, a emotional connection such as a relationship.

Anyways, nice poem. You have a strange style that keeps reminding me of the "right way" to write poetry, is to have rythmn and flow.

That is something i couldn't ever figure out, and yet you do it so effortlessly.

Nicely done. ^_-

I love this one great job ^^
Nice dichotomy in the first part.
A++

cool... it really makes me think about how in-tune existance really is.

Neither can live without the other so true. Nice poem!

Yup. Verry whell done, perhaps some day I will add more of my own poems too.