
Commission done for
Prowler7

Category Story / Transformation
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 102px
File Size 5.5 kB
Hehe. My favorite of this batch, I loved seeing Oliver reduced to nothing but smoke and ash; with more and more of his mind being lost with each puff. The banter between Genevieve and Oliver played out very naturally, leading up to the owl's decision on what to do with the buck. As always, the transformation sequence works beautifully, giving the reader a wonderful sense of the experience Oliver went through.
And I also love how the other, nameless party-goer was turned into nothing more than a lighter and then not even considered as once being a living being. That aspect of Genevieve, where her focus on the task at hand can have consequences to others, which she doesn't even give a moment's thought or memory to. As if they were nothing more than a lighter all along.
Thanks again for these stories. They are so much fun and you always do a wonderful job at capturing so much in so few words. <3
And I also love how the other, nameless party-goer was turned into nothing more than a lighter and then not even considered as once being a living being. That aspect of Genevieve, where her focus on the task at hand can have consequences to others, which she doesn't even give a moment's thought or memory to. As if they were nothing more than a lighter all along.
Thanks again for these stories. They are so much fun and you always do a wonderful job at capturing so much in so few words. <3
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