I really like her. The tone of the image is nice :) And I think the shading is great, especially on her back.

Thank you very much!

'...tried to sketch something...'

Looks like you succeeded to me. Lovely. The only thing I might suggest changing if you do a finished piece based on this is to make the fabric folds at the small of her back less 'regular'. Fabric really does that, yes...But too-even folds somehow don't look right in art. Just like if you paint a perfect sunset people will say the colors are too extreme.

I'll keep it in mind, thank you. ;)

Wonderful work with the lighting..even with these few lines you get a feeling of distant light and evening...

Thanks a lot!

Your ladies are the prettiest. :>

<3!

Watch out, large sheets are addicting. ^_^ Nice picture tho, I like her hair. I'm still unable to draw a hair dressing which makes any sense at all.

Uh, I now notice that I've written it wrong! It's not an A3 sheet, it's an A5.
Thank you, anyway! Hair are quite hard to draw, especially convincing hair. I'm still not very happy with my style.