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So, I was watching Jason and the Argonauts last night, and one of the scenes gave me something I haven't had in a long time. An idea! *Le Gasp!* Seeing as I've been totally unproductive lately, I latched onto the idea with the tenacity of an Arcturan MegaLeech, and totally refused to let go.
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Excellent, great to see you writing again. It's a concept I'm familiar with and have often said as being a likely situation if God(s) do exist: this is a game to them, nothing more and nothing less. I agree with Tonin that stanzas 4 and 6 were probably the best, although I'd say that the 5th stood out to me too and overall this is a well done piece.
Thanks! I've always been bad when it comes to productivity, but it really has been too long since I wrote anything.
What's funny is that the fourth stanza was actually the last one written, because no matter what I did I just wasn't satisfied with it. Sounds like the extra time really did help iron out the kinks.
What's funny is that the fourth stanza was actually the last one written, because no matter what I did I just wasn't satisfied with it. Sounds like the extra time really did help iron out the kinks.
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