
Hey please don't use this for anything (like someone actually would) XDD
Completed May 27th 2021
Having to upload this on my iPad as apparently FA kept bugging out the Riptide Records text, like despite the text being small in the image once I upload it it scales that text up so idk
I kinda find it funny that Jordan is my most introverted character yet I draw art like this more so then any my crew. X,D
Since it is still shark week I wanted to save this piece for this special occasion, seemed fitting it would be Jordan since I haven't drawn her in awhile, think like November of last year. X,,D That aside though had quite a bit of fun drawing this, felt like doing another Hiroshi Nagai inspired background for a more simple approach and I feel a lot more confident in the foliage this time, especially with the bush, feels a bit more solid as with the accompanying flowers, something else to note as well is a feel a lot better with the hand, feels more solid as with the fingers themselves like there not quite as stiff then before. Think that might be all, hope this is ok and happy shark week!!!
And now this part
- idk how to describe this one but I feel there needs to be some kind of better transition from the pool water to the wall. Like theres the water then just immediately a wall, idk maybe this is something the shading can help with but I can't figure it out
Total flaws=1 And I think that might be all, feedback is greatly appreciated and I'll see you guys later.
Art and character belong to me
So I am getting a fursuit of Spitfire!! I got the fursuit reference so here it is! https://sta.sh/016sqgwfvucs
Completed May 27th 2021
Having to upload this on my iPad as apparently FA kept bugging out the Riptide Records text, like despite the text being small in the image once I upload it it scales that text up so idk
I kinda find it funny that Jordan is my most introverted character yet I draw art like this more so then any my crew. X,D
Since it is still shark week I wanted to save this piece for this special occasion, seemed fitting it would be Jordan since I haven't drawn her in awhile, think like November of last year. X,,D That aside though had quite a bit of fun drawing this, felt like doing another Hiroshi Nagai inspired background for a more simple approach and I feel a lot more confident in the foliage this time, especially with the bush, feels a bit more solid as with the accompanying flowers, something else to note as well is a feel a lot better with the hand, feels more solid as with the fingers themselves like there not quite as stiff then before. Think that might be all, hope this is ok and happy shark week!!!
And now this part
- idk how to describe this one but I feel there needs to be some kind of better transition from the pool water to the wall. Like theres the water then just immediately a wall, idk maybe this is something the shading can help with but I can't figure it out
Total flaws=1 And I think that might be all, feedback is greatly appreciated and I'll see you guys later.
Art and character belong to me

So I am getting a fursuit of Spitfire!! I got the fursuit reference so here it is! https://sta.sh/016sqgwfvucs
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Shark
Size 1280 x 1230px
File Size 261.7 kB
Listed in Folders
Woohoo, staying fancy with the Hiroshi Nagai-like background and also the swimming pool here! Good work with the background props. Jordan is also still lovely as always with her signature purple top and I can see the improvement in your said parts so kudos for that! A nice cool drink is totally much needed for the summer season! ^^
About the transition part thingy, I would suggest giving like tiny white line or maybe a darker shade just to highlight the liquid end that borders with the solid object. You can also try browsing swimming pool photo for a reference to that. Hope that helps! ;)
Gotta keep the Shark Week tradition going! XD
About the transition part thingy, I would suggest giving like tiny white line or maybe a darker shade just to highlight the liquid end that borders with the solid object. You can also try browsing swimming pool photo for a reference to that. Hope that helps! ;)
Gotta keep the Shark Week tradition going! XD
Yeah! ^^ Felt like a good time to include it since everything is very toasty over here right now! Really happy to hear the background looks good for you. Almost like her primary outfit at this point hehe, great to hear you think so too, hopefully I can keep it up. Agreed and a nice cool breeze! ^w^
Oh ok nice! Yeah think the darker border might help with that as with maybe some shadow bits or something, will have to try it out whenever a new pool scene comes up. :3
Absolutely! X,3
Oh ok nice! Yeah think the darker border might help with that as with maybe some shadow bits or something, will have to try it out whenever a new pool scene comes up. :3
Absolutely! X,3
Very nice and chill!
I can tell you used your 'poster' as inspiration for the background colouration ;P
The rather dark sky helps elevate your character from it very well, good job! :3
I'd suggest to crop some of that beach-area and lower the skyline so that Jordan's head is more in the sky to give her even more room to shine :3
I can tell you used your 'poster' as inspiration for the background colouration ;P
The rather dark sky helps elevate your character from it very well, good job! :3
I'd suggest to crop some of that beach-area and lower the skyline so that Jordan's head is more in the sky to give her even more room to shine :3
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