Not a bad job on this poem, as usual and its rather creative as well.

I try! x3

Thanks Crystal; I admit though, I had a bit of trouble conveying the creative aspects of this one. I'm quite picky with my word choice. =|

Ah, "sophisticated." I really think sophistication exudes from this particular poem. The tone is highly inquisitive, and the topic being discussed is rather playful, but taken from a fairly serious standpoint. =3

But yes, I'm very pleased with my word choice here, I'm glad you enjoyed that aspect! ^^

And yes, "petalled"; the eyes lurve it! :U

Thanks for the lovely comment and fave, you brilliantly asinine person! =D

Nicely done D :O3 Quite an interesting philosophical concept here (though apparently the science does not prove out, gravity does not apply the same way to smaller objects compared to massive ones *shrug*)
And the pictures you choose to go with your poetry are always superb! This one is no different

Why thank ya, Ethan! :D

And yes, sadly, science disproves my poem quite thoroughly, BUT, that's the fun part! =>

The picture is pretty nice, isn't it? It's at a nice angle, is focused on a single daisy, and...bee! ^^

Intriging, I love the concept of this poem. It uses gravity to express the alluring nature of flowers as if they were celestial bodies. This is also very metaphorical in a sense. Brillant poem. ^^

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JO-AC8SQcNk

It really is the kinda topic I'd expound upon! :D

Can't think  Nuclear_Fusion enough for providing the topic base. ^^

I'm really glad you enjoyed the concept, and those are some GORGEOUS flowers in that there video! I adore nature, flowers in particular! =3

Thanks again, Rai!

I'm really liking the concept in this poem.

Brilliant as always C:

Eeeeeeee, I loved it so much too! 8D

I mean, c'mon, it's space AND flowers! What more could I ask for? D=

Hehe, many thanks for comment, Tek. ^^

I like how you approached the flower at the begining, nicely done.

Would you believe that it wasn't originally that way? Halfway through the poem, I felt something was missing; I needed a stronger intro. After completing most of the poem, I came up with that first quatrain; I'm really glad I came back to the touch up the beginning. ^^

Much obliged for the kind words, Moonfir. =3

Well writen D-Tail!! I loved the ending how you compared nature to space, an interesting look as space "shows no sign of life" and nature basically is life. It had me stop and think for a moment, and made me go back and read it... 2 times :P

Oh I assure you, Nick, the last quatrain is my absolute favorite!--for that very reason as well, actually. \(^o^)/

You had to double-take, you say? Heeeeeee, that is a good thing! :3

But I feel a poem MUST have a strong ending! I believe it to just be a requirement, though its "strength" may be opinionated. =U

I'm glad you enjoyed, my friend, and Lord knows I still adore your current icon! That hair just works for ya. x)

I totally agree!! A strong ending leaves your readers in a very good mood, and excited to read your next! Or at least that's how it works for me :P

Thank you very much!! I really like that pic too :) Only is disappointing because my hair used to look like that, but I decided to cut it. Oh well, it'll grow back :) And may I compliment you on your icon! it's very well done! and suits you very much!

Hehe, well my icon is merely a cropped portion of my badge commission from  Patto, but, it does make for a great icon. x3

Yup yup!! With your face, the subtle feather accent meaning you write and the whole "D" In the bottom corner completes it!!

Yes, you guessed it. I am most jealous of your icon of awesomesaucary.

Wow, you actually broke down the cool aspects rather nicely. (o.o)

Though it's cropped, the "D" (which is often a nickname for me here) is clearly noticeable, and there's a fair amount of golden quill present too. ^^

You has a keen eye, sir. =U

Thank you for the compliment about my eyes!! I like them too!! Didn't get them a long time ago either, you can really get them cheep these days! I Wanted blue, but they were all sold out, so I got brown. :V

nice job, i like this one a lot.

Thank you, dear Poetic! :3

i luff this poem as i always do ^_^
the topic is so creative and the word choice amazing as well
although, the word(and or some form of it) gravity appears alot which kinda throws me off
but then the ending is spectacular it really makes the piece
great job :3

Well, I'm definitely glad to hear you enjoyed the topic; you know me, I like to think out-of-the-box, but  Nuclear_Fusion did provide the base idea for the poem. =3

As for the words "gravity" and "gravitates," I suppose I can see your point, especially since you're used to reading my poems--which have never had a key word pronounced so much. It was a stylistic choice, as gravity is a unifying theme throughout the poem, but your opinion is quite valid. ^^

Though I'm overjoyed you think the ending is "spectacular"; it even surprised me when I wrote it! 'Twas a good sign. =)

Thank you very much, Yavy! =D

epic :o

:3

beautiful use of language to paint the most amazing pictures. truly marvelous work, as usual =3

Why thank you, Red! :D

I'm happy to hear you enjoy my poetic word-painting; the feedback is greatly appreciated. ^^

*huggles* any time! =3
its always a great pleasure seeing your work! ^^

I...I can't think of anything to say, except perhaps: *Standing ovation*

*bows* x3

Well thank you kindly, good sir! :O

Most enjoyable, sir :) It seems many have already pointed out the strength of that last quatrain in particular. Your words there really are extraordinarily clever and thought-provoking, while still maintaining that playful tone you always pull off so well! Lovely juxtaposition - bravo!

Do forgive my tardy reply, Napoleon; I was wrapped up in a paper assignment! ^^;

But, ah, thank you very much for your comment, sir; it was a fairly out-of-the-blue surprise. x3

Hehe, and, yes, I do loves me a strong ending. I'm glad you think it's "cleverly thought-provoking," especially since I've always thought of my poems as being pretty but shallow. =)

4 days is nothing compared to 3 months; the apologies are all mine! And your poems are anything but shallow. They merely happen to leave a great impression no matter whether the reader reads deeply into them or not :) It's poetry for the masses!

This comment brought a smile to my face. x3

What you mentioned is essentially my goal when writing poetry: "to leave a great impression" (preferably without having to look deeply). =D

Thank you once again, oh great minuscule leader! \(^-^)/