
My attempt to write a story from the perspective of character removed from my age range. I think I did alright, but I'm not super positive. The main action in the story was inspired by
schindler's idea to have a story of someone finding some stuff in an attic.
I also tried to capture a little bit of loss and nostalgia. Being so young, though, I don't think I can accurately portray them until I've really experienced them. That and someone as close as a spouse dying. I don't think I captured those emotions as true to life as I'd like, either, but...
Well, I hope you enjoy reading this, anyway. I know it's not perfect... I finished writing it only a few minutes ago, and it's 5:30 AM right now. I should really not write things like this at such odd hours...

I also tried to capture a little bit of loss and nostalgia. Being so young, though, I don't think I can accurately portray them until I've really experienced them. That and someone as close as a spouse dying. I don't think I captured those emotions as true to life as I'd like, either, but...
Well, I hope you enjoy reading this, anyway. I know it's not perfect... I finished writing it only a few minutes ago, and it's 5:30 AM right now. I should really not write things like this at such odd hours...
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 95px
File Size 13.8 kB
Wow! This is really well done. I think you did an amazing job on the emotions, despite anything. Just as with your other stories, the details and descriptions of each scene are spot on and great. I love the simple ways you go through each memory, and which ones seem to stand out more compared to others.
All in all, a wonderful job. Keep it up!
All in all, a wonderful job. Keep it up!
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