Wanted to mess with some stuff while i doodle Julie again. he out fit is just some thing i drew quickly cuz i kinda wanted to get an idea of what her figure is, usually she wears heavy and baggy clothing so its kinda hard to tell what her build is. The main thing i wanted to mess with was her eyes. Her eyes are normally pointy and kinda angular or some thing so i wanted to mess with making them a bit more rounded, i think it turned out good i think her face looks very cute but not really child like which is good cuz Julie is suppose to be like late teens early 20s in this pic (well that's what i think any ways).
Oh almost forgot, she dose have a right arm its just behind her. Its sort of a habit i my self have is that i put my right arm behind me when im just kinda standing around and talking, thought that might be an interesting trait to give one of my characters
Oh almost forgot, she dose have a right arm its just behind her. Its sort of a habit i my self have is that i put my right arm behind me when im just kinda standing around and talking, thought that might be an interesting trait to give one of my characters
Category Designs / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 600 x 1000px
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...Eh.
The whole "arm-behind-character" thing doesn't quite work out if the arm behind the character appears to be (or, in this case, IS) shorter than the other arm.
A personal thing, but I haven't quite adjusted to Julie's new "round eyes." Also, the eyes are be too far apart from each other.
Still wish she had a different hairstyle (another personal thing). Just seems slightly generic (not entirely, but slightly).
Overall, it's rather...okay. Needs some improvements.
The whole "arm-behind-character" thing doesn't quite work out if the arm behind the character appears to be (or, in this case, IS) shorter than the other arm.
A personal thing, but I haven't quite adjusted to Julie's new "round eyes." Also, the eyes are be too far apart from each other.
Still wish she had a different hairstyle (another personal thing). Just seems slightly generic (not entirely, but slightly).
Overall, it's rather...okay. Needs some improvements.
Just be certain (above all the other nitpicks I made) to focus on the arm length. That sort of thing just bugs me.
It'll probably take me a few hours to adjust to the eyes.
Perhaps you should try drawing her in poses you haven't tried before (or haven't drawn in a long time).
And the only reason I can come up with for why I leave such nit-picky critiques is because I see potential. How's that for an excuse?
It'll probably take me a few hours to adjust to the eyes.
Perhaps you should try drawing her in poses you haven't tried before (or haven't drawn in a long time).
And the only reason I can come up with for why I leave such nit-picky critiques is because I see potential. How's that for an excuse?
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