Here's the first song I ever wrote lyrics for. It was for my first band "Parallax"
We eventually broke up when I graduated but I think I filled in all the parts decently.
it's slightly different but basically the same song just with.. frankly a better singer X3

wacha think?

lyrics:
The color red

I cannot help to mend the views that govern
You cannot change the way your privacy's shunted
The desert it confuses the senses
To override just to collect your pence and
Believe in that which never shows it's face

Chorus:

It's just the color red
reflected in your eyes
Reflected in your heart
Reflected in your pry

It's just the color red
Burnin' through your disguise
The way you come along
The lies are amplified
It's just the color red

Witch hunts are inspired by the lyers
Propaganda's shouted by the criers
Knowledge is just truth despised
To remedy your rotting minds
And cushion your descent into obscurity

Chorus

Bridge:

If you think they're bluffing here's your guarantee
You'll see how far they go to claim their property
People are property

Green inspires growth that battles desire
Yellow it controls the unprovoked fire
Red's the blood that oozes through borders
Contradicting the holy one's orders
White's the only color that can save