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So I just wanna say, while I agree this situation is not great or okay, there is a huge difference between the start and now. These two know each other. That drunk guy was a stranger. That makes a pretty big hell of a difference imo and that's probably why most people aren't actually comparing the two.
Both are forcing physical contact, the method of operandi is just different.
Alex was drunk and went for direct contact.
our 'protagonist' is doing so psychologically.
Both are low. And with the drunk aspect, whilst not allowed does influence still the guy's behavior, she is far from drunk and knows what she is doing.
Alex was drunk and went for direct contact.
our 'protagonist' is doing so psychologically.
Both are low. And with the drunk aspect, whilst not allowed does influence still the guy's behavior, she is far from drunk and knows what she is doing.
That would be hilarious. He's clearly not too keen on this attention and she's coming off as a little creepy, at least to me. The male character's 'arc' seems like your average self-insert "Nice guy saves a girl from a creep at a party and reluctantly accepts sexual favors." so honestly this could go anywhere.
And she babbles to all her friends standing around her, because she wasn't waking up, and says. I had this totally amazing dream! And you were there Alex, and you Grakor, and you too Scarecrow and Cowardly Lion! You were all there!... And Grakor, you totally blew me the F*CK OFF... YOU SON OF A B*TCH!!! **SLAP**
I don’t think he flipped… “I can’t provide those” and “I believe those are required” are not contradictory statements. If it was put into a single statement it could be “I can’t provide (x and y items), and personally feel they are required for this activity. Because I can’t provide those right now, I am not in a position to partake in this activity.”
Well, so far, all she's done is come on to him. She hasn't tried to touch or force him into the situation that, obviously, causes him some slight trepidation. Of course, he could also secretly have a crush on her and, now that it's possible that he could actually experience the fulfillment of his crush, he's feeling inadequate. I know if I found myself in this situation, I'd start feeling a bit inadequate.
Stripping nude in front of someone IS trying to force them. Just not physically.
So youre saying that if a friend you didnt like like that, started getting nude in front of you, saying they want to have sex with you, youd be fine and dandy and mentally be like 'this is okay because theyre not touching me. Its not trying to force me at all'? lol
So youre saying that if a friend you didnt like like that, started getting nude in front of you, saying they want to have sex with you, youd be fine and dandy and mentally be like 'this is okay because theyre not touching me. Its not trying to force me at all'? lol
Sadly I can only assume that the people commenting stuff like that shes not doing anything wrong, havent been SA'd. (not sad that they havent, cause thats great for them, but more sad that they clearly dont understand non consent situations and how it feels.)
Im not mad that this story is being told and its going this way but I am invested in the characters and story so I do hope for the best and am annoyed when what I thought was a decent character turns out to be a creepy.
All these people saying 'its just porn calm down' to everyone clearly dont read anything for story. lol
If the author didnt want us focusing on the story and characters at all and wanted us to just care about the sex parts, theyd not bother with a story at all. lol
Im not mad that this story is being told and its going this way but I am invested in the characters and story so I do hope for the best and am annoyed when what I thought was a decent character turns out to be a creepy.
All these people saying 'its just porn calm down' to everyone clearly dont read anything for story. lol
If the author didnt want us focusing on the story and characters at all and wanted us to just care about the sex parts, theyd not bother with a story at all. lol
Well, remember, my response was to the person who said that she's doing the same thing as the guy at the bar. He was grabbing her, touching her, and flipping her skirt up to show off her panties. However, I believe that what she's doing is offering not forcing. Of course, I don't have a lot of experience with this situation and I could be wrong.
When you strip in front of someone when they have already said no multiple times, that is forcing.
Just like it is actually considered r*pe when a man will continuously pressure a woman, who is saying no many times, to finally get her to cave and say yes.
A pressured yes is not a yes. It is a no. Especially when no came before that pressured yes.
What she is doing here is, irl, illegal and is considered sexual assault.
Just like it is actually considered r*pe when a man will continuously pressure a woman, who is saying no many times, to finally get her to cave and say yes.
A pressured yes is not a yes. It is a no. Especially when no came before that pressured yes.
What she is doing here is, irl, illegal and is considered sexual assault.
He DID say no thank you. Hes said no multiple times in various ways. If someone continues to pressure or even just starts stripping as if theyre not going to take that no for an answer, thats sexual assault. And if sex happens in that process, it is considered rape.
While he doesnt have the 'well shes bigger than me so I just have to cave and just let her do what she wants to me' like many women would, he DOES have the 'well what if I tell her no and she makes some false accusations because of it?' thing and that means she has some sort of power over him, which also contributes to it being rape when pressured into sex like that.
Consent isnt too tricky. If someone says no in ANY way, it is a no and nothing more needs to happen. No more pressuring, no stripping in front of the person to entice farther, etc. Nothing. It needs to stop there or its sexual assault or worse.
While he doesnt have the 'well shes bigger than me so I just have to cave and just let her do what she wants to me' like many women would, he DOES have the 'well what if I tell her no and she makes some false accusations because of it?' thing and that means she has some sort of power over him, which also contributes to it being rape when pressured into sex like that.
Consent isnt too tricky. If someone says no in ANY way, it is a no and nothing more needs to happen. No more pressuring, no stripping in front of the person to entice farther, etc. Nothing. It needs to stop there or its sexual assault or worse.
you're such a prude, get off my comment chain. i've noped out of people trying to force themselves on me before, it's not that hard. if you're not interested all you have to do is get up and leave. seeking out a friendly group and telling them that this person is being sexually aggressive towards you also works. i've never seen someone change their tune so quick as when a half dozen people turned to face them like, "ec-fucking-xcuse you?".
Rape being rape and being bad is NOT an opinion. Neither is the fact that not everyone can just leave when dealing with sexual assault and such.
So yes, you are a garbage person and while I dont know you, YOU put your horrible crappy and false opinions out there for all to see and you will just have to deal with being judged for being the horrible garbage, victim blaming bag of flesh that you are.
So yes, you are a garbage person and while I dont know you, YOU put your horrible crappy and false opinions out there for all to see and you will just have to deal with being judged for being the horrible garbage, victim blaming bag of flesh that you are.
maybe someday when you grow you'll learn that spewing your hatred on the internet changes nothing. you're not changing me or swaying anyone's opinion. iskra doesn't care what you think, I don't care what you think, and no one else that your attacking cares what you think. if you don't like this than leave. you choose to be here. go ahead, type or another comment about how much you hate me. jack yourself off some more. I'm finished with you.
Maybe some day, when you grow, youll learn that spewing dumbass victim blaming bullcrap on the internet makes you look like a complete trash person and makes you one.
And trust me, I dont care about your opinion being swayed at this point. Most trash people remain trash people until something happens to them personally to change it.
Youll always be garbage.
Lowest of the low.
So go ahead, keep showing everyone here just how trashy you really are, you victim blaming piece of human flesh. =]
And trust me, I dont care about your opinion being swayed at this point. Most trash people remain trash people until something happens to them personally to change it.
Youll always be garbage.
Lowest of the low.
So go ahead, keep showing everyone here just how trashy you really are, you victim blaming piece of human flesh. =]
If the author wanted everyone to IGNORE the story, and focus only on the porn part of it, they wouldnt bother writing an actual story.
The fact that people are so invested in these characters is a GOOD thing and you may not like the comments from people that are but thats too bad. That will happen with any good story.
People want whats best for the characters they are invested in and theres nothing wrong with hoping for that and being disappointed af that a character we were rooting for turns out to be a bit of a creep.
The fact that people are so invested in these characters is a GOOD thing and you may not like the comments from people that are but thats too bad. That will happen with any good story.
People want whats best for the characters they are invested in and theres nothing wrong with hoping for that and being disappointed af that a character we were rooting for turns out to be a bit of a creep.
Depends on what you mean by drama queen though. Some people think taking it seriously is being one and some require more extremes to think someone is being a drama queen. So far, most of what im seeing is just people taking the story and whats going on seriously, and I feel thats fine. Especially since it involves non consensual stuff, sexual assault etc.
Many people have been sexually assaulted or worse in their lives and that can easily make them attached to characters in stories that its also happened to.
Many people have been sexually assaulted or worse in their lives and that can easily make them attached to characters in stories that its also happened to.
lol Now look whos the drama queen.
Shoving opinions in others faces all because you disagree.
So many things to pick apart with that.
1. Not shoving anything in anyones face as its a public forum and these comments are open for all. No ones up in your silly little inbox trying to tell you crap.
2. What constitutes as sexual assault and such is NOT an opinion.
3. Trust me when I say that you are NOT special and arent the only one that gets to comment here however they please.
and 4. Some minds are changed with discussion and other similar methods. Its important to question people on their views. Especially if they are very wrong views (like how some people think none of whats gone on in this comic is sexual harassment etc).
I also find it hilarious that you just said that, considering the fact that you arent even on your own comment chain, doing the same thing everyone else you complain about is doing, except more on the side of the people that see nothing wrong here.
ALSO, Id like to once again (ive said this to a good few of yall complaining about us getting so invested) state that a GOOD story WILL evoke emotional responses, which WILL get a good discussion or even concern etc from the readers. This is a decent story and there is absolutely nothing wrong with people being invested in the characters, wanting better for them, etc.
Most of the people that are getting super emotional with responses, are mostly in response to jackasses that want to claim that no form of sexual harassment/assault etc is going on in the story, or have some double standard with it, and thats understandable because plenty of people have been assaulted in their lives and having some idiot state that whats CLEARLY sexual harassment or worse, isnt anything at all.
So in that aspect, their complaints etc are less with the story at that point and more with those idiots and their very real point of views on the matter, which are concerning because what kind of things do they think its okay for them to do irl if they see nothing wrong here at all?
Shoving opinions in others faces all because you disagree.
So many things to pick apart with that.
1. Not shoving anything in anyones face as its a public forum and these comments are open for all. No ones up in your silly little inbox trying to tell you crap.
2. What constitutes as sexual assault and such is NOT an opinion.
3. Trust me when I say that you are NOT special and arent the only one that gets to comment here however they please.
and 4. Some minds are changed with discussion and other similar methods. Its important to question people on their views. Especially if they are very wrong views (like how some people think none of whats gone on in this comic is sexual harassment etc).
I also find it hilarious that you just said that, considering the fact that you arent even on your own comment chain, doing the same thing everyone else you complain about is doing, except more on the side of the people that see nothing wrong here.
ALSO, Id like to once again (ive said this to a good few of yall complaining about us getting so invested) state that a GOOD story WILL evoke emotional responses, which WILL get a good discussion or even concern etc from the readers. This is a decent story and there is absolutely nothing wrong with people being invested in the characters, wanting better for them, etc.
Most of the people that are getting super emotional with responses, are mostly in response to jackasses that want to claim that no form of sexual harassment/assault etc is going on in the story, or have some double standard with it, and thats understandable because plenty of people have been assaulted in their lives and having some idiot state that whats CLEARLY sexual harassment or worse, isnt anything at all.
So in that aspect, their complaints etc are less with the story at that point and more with those idiots and their very real point of views on the matter, which are concerning because what kind of things do they think its okay for them to do irl if they see nothing wrong here at all?
I mean, the comment section has been less than ideal each new page. Is it hard to imagine that Iskra is baiting us with this last 2 pages?
If not, its just a middle finger to everyone who takes an issue with these.
Either way, my opinion still stands: people get rilled up too easily nowadays.
If not, its just a middle finger to everyone who takes an issue with these.
Either way, my opinion still stands: people get rilled up too easily nowadays.
Some people are into being rescued.... then princess carried. (He's apparently done this more than once.)
She was probably more interested in gakor than the other dude, and some people bounce back from crazy encounters like that faster than others.
Honestly this isnt that weird. She may just feel safe giving it up to him compared to that other guy. She doesnt strike me as the type to curl up in a corner when someone catches a look at her undies, especially given how she acted at the party... barely even seems phased by it. Some people get drunk at parties and real embarrassing shit happens to em. (I was witness to plenty of that uber driving in a college town) Didnt stop them from partying though. College kids have loose lips in an Uber, they talk about all the crazy shit they do amongst each other, wilder than what happened at that party, and they're going to another party the next day, or in the next few hours. Had a group of girls in the car talk about this guy that tried to force himself on her and the girls being smart were in a group... but they were going to another one and were laughing about the drunk dude they left at the other party.
Basically what I'm sayin is what I said earlier. Not everyone lets a bad situation get to them.
She was probably more interested in gakor than the other dude, and some people bounce back from crazy encounters like that faster than others.
Honestly this isnt that weird. She may just feel safe giving it up to him compared to that other guy. She doesnt strike me as the type to curl up in a corner when someone catches a look at her undies, especially given how she acted at the party... barely even seems phased by it. Some people get drunk at parties and real embarrassing shit happens to em. (I was witness to plenty of that uber driving in a college town) Didnt stop them from partying though. College kids have loose lips in an Uber, they talk about all the crazy shit they do amongst each other, wilder than what happened at that party, and they're going to another party the next day, or in the next few hours. Had a group of girls in the car talk about this guy that tried to force himself on her and the girls being smart were in a group... but they were going to another one and were laughing about the drunk dude they left at the other party.
Basically what I'm sayin is what I said earlier. Not everyone lets a bad situation get to them.
He hasn't been straightforward with her until literally this page, what do you mean? Everything he's said leaves room for her misunderstanding that he might just be dense, intentionally or otherwise. He has shown he's reluctant at the most. Most people who want someone else to do something when they show reluctance is push to get them to change their mind. This is why the saying is "just say no." Its because if you say anything else you leave room for misunderstandings and misinterpretation.
Wrong.
Gakor has showed his disinterest since page thirteen.
And if you do not believe me, click here.
I think you misinterpreted what he said there.. "I'm not a lovey dovey guy" means I'm not into the sappy love story level stuff. Thats not a no, in fact that statement alone actually validates the idea he may be open to sex without romantic strings... That sends one message, but then....
"I aint relationship material... I can't give you that stuff." Focus on the wording. Lets break it down. "I aint relationship material" means he's got some self esteem issues when it comes to being in a relationship, he doesnt think he's good at them, or he doesnt think they would stay together or mesh well in a relationship. "I can't give you that stuff." Look at the wording "Can't" does not mean "don't want to." even piggy backed off the first half of the sentance, the added context tells you he thinks only people in relationships should be having sex. This also doesnt mean he doesnt want to... it means he doesnt think its RIGHT to. Theres a huge distinction there. This is why I keep saying, he has not given her a hard no yet. This is why I keep saying, if you dont want someone to push CLOSE THE DOOR. SAY NO.
"I aint relationship material... I can't give you that stuff." Focus on the wording. Lets break it down. "I aint relationship material" means he's got some self esteem issues when it comes to being in a relationship, he doesnt think he's good at them, or he doesnt think they would stay together or mesh well in a relationship. "I can't give you that stuff." Look at the wording "Can't" does not mean "don't want to." even piggy backed off the first half of the sentance, the added context tells you he thinks only people in relationships should be having sex. This also doesnt mean he doesnt want to... it means he doesnt think its RIGHT to. Theres a huge distinction there. This is why I keep saying, he has not given her a hard no yet. This is why I keep saying, if you dont want someone to push CLOSE THE DOOR. SAY NO.
Malikfoxen wrote:This is why I keep saying, he has not given her a hard no yet And he never will.
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Yeah I saw that. Mildly disappointing but amazingly funny. I kinda was gearing up for them to talk it out more but since he just so bluntly "proved me right" .... not in the way I wished he would mind you. I guess no point in debating it anymore. But... his response isnt WHOLLY unrealistic as much as its disappointing. Some guys will do their damndest to make sure she wants it by giving as much pushback as possible till the clothes are off. MOre often than not it leaves the girl leaving frustrated sand the guy being like "goddammit, threw away my chance."
Consent is not hard, and if you arent interested in getting into the conversation about it, then yeah, you can say no, but I don't see any issue with trying to get a straight answer, because there are situations where you communicate to people what you want in roundabout ways and theyre just not getting your meaning... how exactly do you expect to ever get what you want if you stop there, especially with how often two people who want the same thing misunderstand each other and have arguments about it because they arent being straight with one another?
Your attempt to oversimplify something as complex as human interaction doesnt make me think you're thinking from multiple angles on this.
Your attempt to oversimplify something as complex as human interaction doesnt make me think you're thinking from multiple angles on this.
Thats the thing though, there was no conversation in this comic between them before she jumped to stripping in front of him.
Your attempt to excuse that makes me worry for anyone you may have sexual interest in.
Its called enthusiastic consent. You dont have it, and they dont give you a flat out yes?
Then dont strip in front of them and continue on as if they did say yes.
Its SIMPLE. Its not that hard.
Your attempt to excuse that makes me worry for anyone you may have sexual interest in.
Its called enthusiastic consent. You dont have it, and they dont give you a flat out yes?
Then dont strip in front of them and continue on as if they did say yes.
Its SIMPLE. Its not that hard.
I dont appreciate you trying to bring my character into this, thats a nasty way to argue.
It wasnt an attempt to excuse as much as it was an oversight. Yeah its a bad idea to start stripping before someone says "hey, yeah, Im down." I agree with you on that. But I hate the fact that you went straight to being like "so you would get naked even if someone didnt say yes, got it" to paraphrase rather than something like "Yeah but shes literally stripping down during their conversation... thats not cool."
My error was I tunnel visioned the words and the conversation. My own fault.
Where my mind was was that on just the conversation if they were just talking and she wasnt taking off her clothes, it wouldve behooved him to literally just say no and stop trying to be nice about it so she gets the message. The original argument started over the fact that he wasn't being straight with her, so she wasnt getting the message. I was advocating for the fact that you literally just tell em "nah fam" and stop being a wuss about it. Theyll understand.
Lastly... really glad I dont follow you, basedo n some of the conversations I see you having on this page and how you have them, you seem really difficult to even talk with.
It wasnt an attempt to excuse as much as it was an oversight. Yeah its a bad idea to start stripping before someone says "hey, yeah, Im down." I agree with you on that. But I hate the fact that you went straight to being like "so you would get naked even if someone didnt say yes, got it" to paraphrase rather than something like "Yeah but shes literally stripping down during their conversation... thats not cool."
My error was I tunnel visioned the words and the conversation. My own fault.
Where my mind was was that on just the conversation if they were just talking and she wasnt taking off her clothes, it wouldve behooved him to literally just say no and stop trying to be nice about it so she gets the message. The original argument started over the fact that he wasn't being straight with her, so she wasnt getting the message. I was advocating for the fact that you literally just tell em "nah fam" and stop being a wuss about it. Theyll understand.
Lastly... really glad I dont follow you, basedo n some of the conversations I see you having on this page and how you have them, you seem really difficult to even talk with.
Funny how you attack me on a more personal level and thinking but dont like it when its done to you. Seems your personality may fit perfectly fine with the double standards that come into play in this comic. lol
Also, if you dont want someone to judge you based on what YOU say, then choose words more carefully. Thats on YOU. Not me.
And someone not saying a flat out yes is not on them, If someone doesnt say yes, and you dont know if they want it or not, then ASK or dont continue. Flat out.
AGAIN, it is NOT that hard, Consent is NOT some hugely complex thing. Its not.
The reason many people will make excuses and such, over saying a flat out no, are many and most of them still mean no.
Anything but a yes is a NO. Plain and simple.
And yes, I am difficult to talk with if you are a rape apologist, and make excuses for them. I dont feel bad about that at all. =]
Also, if you dont want someone to judge you based on what YOU say, then choose words more carefully. Thats on YOU. Not me.
And someone not saying a flat out yes is not on them, If someone doesnt say yes, and you dont know if they want it or not, then ASK or dont continue. Flat out.
AGAIN, it is NOT that hard, Consent is NOT some hugely complex thing. Its not.
The reason many people will make excuses and such, over saying a flat out no, are many and most of them still mean no.
Anything but a yes is a NO. Plain and simple.
And yes, I am difficult to talk with if you are a rape apologist, and make excuses for them. I dont feel bad about that at all. =]
Nah yer just an asshole.
I didnt attack you personally either unless you took "maybe you're not looking at this from all angles" as a personal insult, which is what I gather since you accused me of such things. Ive already acknowledged that my issue was tunneling on the dialogue and not imagery. Also personal attacks from me dont happen till you start attacking me personally. You;'re calling me a rape apologist even after I acknowledge where I made an error, so in other words, you're disingenuous when you argue, you dont come to have a conversation, you come to dunk, and to tell other people theyre terrible for any opinion that doesnt mesh with your own, and to me, that makes you trash, so, you can kindly fuck off, go back to drawing and let the adults actually exchange thoughts rather than coming in and trying to shut em all down.
I didnt attack you personally either unless you took "maybe you're not looking at this from all angles" as a personal insult, which is what I gather since you accused me of such things. Ive already acknowledged that my issue was tunneling on the dialogue and not imagery. Also personal attacks from me dont happen till you start attacking me personally. You;'re calling me a rape apologist even after I acknowledge where I made an error, so in other words, you're disingenuous when you argue, you dont come to have a conversation, you come to dunk, and to tell other people theyre terrible for any opinion that doesnt mesh with your own, and to me, that makes you trash, so, you can kindly fuck off, go back to drawing and let the adults actually exchange thoughts rather than coming in and trying to shut em all down.
Naw, you just dont like people calling you out on your SA enabling bs. lol
Its funny you acknowledge that issue but at the same time expect no one else to mention it or for you to have any consequences for it. Seems fairly silly.
And I didnt respond to you first. I DIDNT come here to have a conversation.
I came here to call out people that have some pretty rapey or rape apologist type views and you just rammed yourself in and showed that you clearly needed my comments as well.
Again, all on you.
And as ive said before, to others, rape being bad and people not saying yes means no is NOT an opinion. If someone doesnt say yes to sex, and is making excuses, its a no.
Enthusiastic consent is a thing and its VERY simple.
And if you want to make excuses for people doing whats done in this comic (which you are doing), you ARE a rape apologist. Simple as that.
So YOU can kindly fuck off and stop being garbage. YOU came here and talked to me first. I am responding. Dont like it, then take your advice, fuck off, and dont respond to me because I WILL continue to call you out for your shit.
You dont like it but thats too damn bad.
I will continue to shut down rapey bs, rape apologist bs etc. I will NEVER stop and gross people like you, who want to make excuses for it, will always want people like me to be quiet.
Too bad. I wont stop until you do.
Its funny you acknowledge that issue but at the same time expect no one else to mention it or for you to have any consequences for it. Seems fairly silly.
And I didnt respond to you first. I DIDNT come here to have a conversation.
I came here to call out people that have some pretty rapey or rape apologist type views and you just rammed yourself in and showed that you clearly needed my comments as well.
Again, all on you.
And as ive said before, to others, rape being bad and people not saying yes means no is NOT an opinion. If someone doesnt say yes to sex, and is making excuses, its a no.
Enthusiastic consent is a thing and its VERY simple.
And if you want to make excuses for people doing whats done in this comic (which you are doing), you ARE a rape apologist. Simple as that.
So YOU can kindly fuck off and stop being garbage. YOU came here and talked to me first. I am responding. Dont like it, then take your advice, fuck off, and dont respond to me because I WILL continue to call you out for your shit.
You dont like it but thats too damn bad.
I will continue to shut down rapey bs, rape apologist bs etc. I will NEVER stop and gross people like you, who want to make excuses for it, will always want people like me to be quiet.
Too bad. I wont stop until you do.
I think this is a really nice picture set. The characters are well drawn. The backgrounds have nice detail. Unfortunately the dialog is ... to be nice lacking. Part of the problem is that these are one panel shots and a lot of information is crammed into each panel without the aid of reaction images that could indicate what the character is hinting at along the way. On top of that pertinent character information is just tossed in at intervals and doesn't really have the impact it should.
This could have been solved with doing a traditional comic set up with multiple panels showing various actions and reactions of the characters as they are talking, walking whatever. For example, if at the beginning we had Gakor and Iskra arriving at the party and Iskra act like, "It's been ... what a month since I last saw you," and Gakor reply, "Yeah sorry about that work doesn't ... leave much time for a social life." Then things progress from there. Maybe she has a lingering look at him as he gets involved in another conversation and she with someone else with events leading to the altercation between Gakor and Alex.
As it stands currently the comic is best viewed without the dialog. The characters do a good enough job in general of carrying the story with the reader filling in some of the gaps in what is just a really basic the white knight gets laid by the damsel in distress porno story. The dialog as it is actually makes it more muddled and honestly makes me care less about the characters involved to the point where I just want them to cut to the chase and get on with it.
This could have been solved with doing a traditional comic set up with multiple panels showing various actions and reactions of the characters as they are talking, walking whatever. For example, if at the beginning we had Gakor and Iskra arriving at the party and Iskra act like, "It's been ... what a month since I last saw you," and Gakor reply, "Yeah sorry about that work doesn't ... leave much time for a social life." Then things progress from there. Maybe she has a lingering look at him as he gets involved in another conversation and she with someone else with events leading to the altercation between Gakor and Alex.
As it stands currently the comic is best viewed without the dialog. The characters do a good enough job in general of carrying the story with the reader filling in some of the gaps in what is just a really basic the white knight gets laid by the damsel in distress porno story. The dialog as it is actually makes it more muddled and honestly makes me care less about the characters involved to the point where I just want them to cut to the chase and get on with it.
I ABSOLUTELY agree with this guy, even in this situation... maybe ESPECIALLY in this situation. It's like she's cornered him so now she's going in for the kill.
I also vaguely feel like 'Now I know why that other guy felt it was ok to do what he did earlier in the comic. He knew he had a chance of her just letting him get it.'
I also vaguely feel like 'Now I know why that other guy felt it was ok to do what he did earlier in the comic. He knew he had a chance of her just letting him get it.'
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