Here is the WIP for the Background of my piece for Krystal Appreciation Month. BGs are something I have some difficulty with so any constructive criticism is welcome.
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1279 x 930px
File Size 345 kB
Glad to see you doing something for KrAM! You say you have difficulty with backgrounds but it seems like this is turning our really well. Good job with the foreshortening here, it works well for creating a sense of depth. That especially goes for the leafy plants. It seems like things gets blurrier/out of focus as they go further back, which gives it a cinematic feel. If you wanted to include more detail for things like the trees and such you certainly could, but less detail works fine for a background if the focus is on the characters.
The one thing that stood out to critique is the top rock, instead of being a smooth curve it's a series of sharp edges like a gear. You did a good job making the rest of the background look natural so it really stands out.
Otherwise, this looks like a great start! Looking forward to seeing your final KrAM scene!
The one thing that stood out to critique is the top rock, instead of being a smooth curve it's a series of sharp edges like a gear. You did a good job making the rest of the background look natural so it really stands out.
Otherwise, this looks like a great start! Looking forward to seeing your final KrAM scene!
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