
Trust in yourself and no one does
I never lie, yet deceits all around
What they promise what they say
they can't even cash it on their own
what they seek were mere fun and joy
and here is wish they will suffer till forever and more
If there were a wish, I will want to wish that all those who says things that they cannot fulfill will suffer till the day they die *smile* May their life be fill with grief and agony. Amen.
I never lie, yet deceits all around
What they promise what they say
they can't even cash it on their own
what they seek were mere fun and joy
and here is wish they will suffer till forever and more
If there were a wish, I will want to wish that all those who says things that they cannot fulfill will suffer till the day they die *smile* May their life be fill with grief and agony. Amen.
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Very beautiful but dark and seems a tad spiteful. Broken promises do hurt a lot, but some have reason even if we ourselves cannot see them. That is why it is important to learn forgiveness for those sad people and for those that have done wrong. Let them learn from their mistakes and lend them a hand instead of watching them suffer as they have, or you might be no better then them.
Well first off *applauds* this.. is.. amazing... :o
Wow, I only have limited time here now and I'm glad I spent it here truly
The emotion here is so thick... so potent and raw it almost draws me in heh XD
"sing
sing so it will be heard the foolishness that wasn't just yours
hate
hate those fool who have lie to you"
But that... that hit me like a wall it was so powerful... really your writing is admirable, I do enjoy it and always wait for the next one and as for the message? I agree though you're a Tad darker than I am haha, just a Tad XD
And those who abuse promises should meet a similar fate
Wow, I only have limited time here now and I'm glad I spent it here truly
The emotion here is so thick... so potent and raw it almost draws me in heh XD
"sing
sing so it will be heard the foolishness that wasn't just yours
hate
hate those fool who have lie to you"
But that... that hit me like a wall it was so powerful... really your writing is admirable, I do enjoy it and always wait for the next one and as for the message? I agree though you're a Tad darker than I am haha, just a Tad XD
And those who abuse promises should meet a similar fate
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