
Portrait of the eponymous character of "Beauty and the Beast", a take on the old story I'm writing.
Beast looks different every time I draw him; this is lampshaded in the story by his beastliness varying with his moods. Looks a bit like an allosaurus here. If he's really pissed off, he'll sprout extra spikes and horns, the plates of his skull shift about, his limb proportions alter, he might pop open another eye or grow fleshy catfish-style lip tendrils, that sort of thing.
I got the idea for this after watching Cocteau's film, the first time I'd ever seen it all the way through, on TV recently. You could really trace the pedigree of the Disney film right back to it. In both version, the beast was vaguely leonine and physically appealing in the manner of a large mammalian carnivore. Imagine if beast had looked like a giant tarantula-squid instead of a furry wet dream . . . would have made Beauty's ability to love him a little more impressive, eh?
So my beast isn't quite that gross, although he does have a bad drooling problem. This is more a portrait of his tongue, it looks like. His forelimbs are armed with talons and lack dexterity, so he uses the little finger tendrils on the tongue tip for fine manipulation. It can also taste the air, like a snake's - his hearing is decent, but his eyesight is lousy, so he depends on its tactile sensitivity to examine things in detail. The bioluminant yellow things are cartilaginous spikes, used to rasp meat off bone, which flatten and merge into a softer frill that runs down the side. Also like a reptile, his tongue is rooted at the front of the jaw, not the back. That tube looking thing is the glottis, the opening of the windpipe (snakes poke it out of their mouth so they can breathe when swallowing big prey). Because of the forward location of the glottis, the Beast's voice isn't booming - it's high, resonant, and rasping, a modulated hiss.
Beast looks different every time I draw him; this is lampshaded in the story by his beastliness varying with his moods. Looks a bit like an allosaurus here. If he's really pissed off, he'll sprout extra spikes and horns, the plates of his skull shift about, his limb proportions alter, he might pop open another eye or grow fleshy catfish-style lip tendrils, that sort of thing.
I got the idea for this after watching Cocteau's film, the first time I'd ever seen it all the way through, on TV recently. You could really trace the pedigree of the Disney film right back to it. In both version, the beast was vaguely leonine and physically appealing in the manner of a large mammalian carnivore. Imagine if beast had looked like a giant tarantula-squid instead of a furry wet dream . . . would have made Beauty's ability to love him a little more impressive, eh?
So my beast isn't quite that gross, although he does have a bad drooling problem. This is more a portrait of his tongue, it looks like. His forelimbs are armed with talons and lack dexterity, so he uses the little finger tendrils on the tongue tip for fine manipulation. It can also taste the air, like a snake's - his hearing is decent, but his eyesight is lousy, so he depends on its tactile sensitivity to examine things in detail. The bioluminant yellow things are cartilaginous spikes, used to rasp meat off bone, which flatten and merge into a softer frill that runs down the side. Also like a reptile, his tongue is rooted at the front of the jaw, not the back. That tube looking thing is the glottis, the opening of the windpipe (snakes poke it out of their mouth so they can breathe when swallowing big prey). Because of the forward location of the glottis, the Beast's voice isn't booming - it's high, resonant, and rasping, a modulated hiss.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fetish Other
Species Reptilian (Other)
Size 1100 x 598px
File Size 360.4 kB
Faced the same thing with my writing for a while, until I learned to let go of a lot of the unnecessary detail. Having said that, I am also in the process of writing a "guidebook" that contains all the details I left out of the stories for anyone interested in the universe I created for the characters. Perhaps approaching it from that angle might help you, also? A certain amount of detail is necessary, but it is very easy to just pour it all into the story then find your readers getting bored or turned off by it. All about balance, my friend.
Yes - with "The Island" I'm indulging myself in detail, and also experimenting with not plotting everything out first and just sort of letting things happen. But what I meant wasn't so much written detail - this story is actually rather spare, til it gets to the naughty parts - but detail in the characters.
Detail is good; I think it's important to work these things through. The hard thing, though, is to incorporate the detail into the story and not bog it down with long passages of external description. And not every idea developed needs to be described in the story; having a fully developed backstory can enrich a story even if not everything from the backstory makes it into the book. Something about the author having all that in his/her pocket helps him/her create a richer experience.
This sounds like an interesting idea. I never thought about it, but you're right that the way the Beast is usually portrayed is really not all that far removed from human. It would be much more impressive if the Beast were something truly horrible. I like the artwork, too.
This sounds like an interesting idea. I never thought about it, but you're right that the way the Beast is usually portrayed is really not all that far removed from human. It would be much more impressive if the Beast were something truly horrible. I like the artwork, too.
If the music sounded like this, it was philip glass;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FZhVw3lI7_o
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FZhVw3lI7_o
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