I really liked the parts where you talked about the 3D and how you've discovered it yourself with great examples. But ofcourse some bits could be better, maybe it is because its episode 1 where we see many different perspectives and introductions that there felt like a lot of jumping back and forth between different things. So focus is lost due to me thinking its about story, and then its about detail, etc. The semi-Chronological method might be the culprit. Regardless, you are hitting stuff that is great and then stuff that is just kind of fluff.

Maybe try to value things differently, noticing the clipping bit could have been a very short mention. And if there is story bit that is not too important atm, just run it down quickly and get to what you find more valuable to talk about.

Best parts are how you talked about the 3 bullies, 3D analasys, Ending bit comparing Manga to the Anime.

cool was always interested what's the difference :3