Pretty hair. The color works for her. I like the fabric folds of her shirt exposing her hip like that. The skirt looks good shape wise. Her toes could use a bit of refinement but are placed right where her legs would be despite being hidden. Pretty face too. Left hand seems a bit wonky, thumb may be facing the wrong way though hard to tell how she's holding her hand. The crayon worked fine overal, but the dress is a little splotchy. Good choice to get some use out of the crayons before eating them : )

thanks for the constructive comment =) her hand is supposed to be palmwise to her face and it was just a quick sketch too i just wanted something to color =P