I like the echo. The beginning sounds like someone is playing up on a mountain and it's traveling without fail past ever rock and through every rock. Than when you reach the person playing it he disappears with the wind leaving a new path to take ^.^
I wonder if you try to imagine what could be the situation before you say, "It sucks."
All the comment's you made on your work seems that you've been listening to what other people say about what the situation is, but what exactly do you think? Other than "It sucks."