Not bad. It would be interesting to read a story that does not glorify the concept of war. At least I think it would be rather refreshing, if the main character would try to avoid fighting instead of ardently taking part in the war. =)

Actually I am thining of pushing towards him fighting only if he absolutly has too, I plan on one BIG battle at some point but this is more of a Watership Down must find a safe home for my and those who will follow. Obviously I knwo that not everyone is willing to fight, on both sides, so He will probably take who ever really. But then again he is kine and well humans are ignant (he he ingnant)

Sounds cool to me. I was a great fan of Watership Down, btw... I should read that book again. ^^

Chatper ten as we speak baby. Got I love Hazel.

I am kinda caught on one thing though I am not sure when to place the era, present or future. I want to fighting to have firearms and Blades in it so Obviously it can be before gundpower was discover. But I will make up a pre chapter one for review in a little while and probably post tomorrow.

You could make it cyberpunk and mix different elements of history together. Maybe with some magic too. If the story takes place in a fictional reality it doesn't have to resemble history as it happened on earth. =)

Well the basic pretense is that Darwin was only partially correct, Humans did decend from apes, that is true. But what he failed to see was that the Apes were highly advanced creature and the evolved accordingly becoming Human. Other animals would take millenia to evolve to that same staus and when the first began t appear it cause hysteria and they were named Lycans. But in reality they were the Cavemen of their own species.

Hmmm, I see what you mean. That's a nice idea. Definitely one worth writing about.

Yeah, I think it is a pretty unteresting Idea. But naturally we as humans forget that sometimes we are not the only creatures in this world that can think