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demon87 commission, I have no clue how I'm going to color this but that doesn't matter! I'm so sorry this took so long! If you approve of this design/look I'll get to inking and coloring
demon87 commission, I have no clue how I'm going to color this but that doesn't matter! I'm so sorry this took so long! If you approve of this design/look I'll get to inking and coloring
Category All / All
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 636 x 825px
File Size 85.4 kB
You should work on your anatomy issues, one some pics like this one it really stands out. For example his legs are very disproportionate. Their necks are really small compared to their heads. His hand is massive and looks like it's swollen. Her body is tiny compared to her waist and arms, and their heads are to triangular and pointy rather than smooth and curved. None of this is intended to sound mean, just trying to help and I hope this does help you.
yeah, after reading Kurtsa's comment, some of the Anatomy problems really came out here. They do have slim and long necks, although I don't think heads look bloated or anything. you're kinda going for a semi-animeish look, so that's not an issue. once again hair appears to cling to male characters' skulls, and the lady bunny hear either has a longer right arm then her left, or the mesh on her fishnet is uneven or something. still very nice that you pulled off them holding each other like that and not make it look completely awkward like I would. ^_^
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