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An umok auxiliary gave a blank stare as he looked at a flaming car. Unfortunately, half the vehicle remained missing thanks to a car bomb, which crippled his taloned foot as he sat inert on a concrete road. A crowd of humans, including both soldiers and civilians, watched on or screamed at him as he did nothing but release weak chirping sounds from his chipped beak. Meanwhile, a construction crane behind him went about looping a steel cable around his neck, creating a makeshift noose as hydraulics lifted it towards the sky.
Pressure tightened the cable.
The assembled crowd went wild.
Some screamed vulgarities as if the mere pawn caused all their problems.
From there, the umok choked and gasped for air, up until he departed from this world like all his other comrades.
~~~~~
{So I'm merely speaking to… representatives.} said King Dolus, hand cupping his chin. His hologram stayed around the same size as the other well-dressed humans in the room. {If that's the case, I assume that most of your leaders didn't survive the initial zenari assault, or they otherwise went missing?}
A human wearing a green uniform befitting for a general stepped forward. "Either that or we had to take control until a civilian government could be re-established."
Dolus rolled his eyes and sighed. {Lovely.} He walked a little, flicking his twin tails. {And your so-called United Nations?}
"Dissolved." said a woman wearing a black dress.
{Well... that just complicates things.}
After saying this, Dolus returned to sitting on an ornate chair. He crossed his legs. Although his slim outfit had a more formal appearance, its more minimalistic design with a V-neck collar exposed a tuft of white fur on his chest. Not to mention footwraps rendering his digitigrade toes visible. The assembled group of a few hundred or so humans surrounding his hologram projector included anything from military, religious, or civilian leaders crowding a worn-down auditorium.
{Here's the primary problem…} resumed Dolus, breaking the silence. {Your species isn't united like my own. Trying to do individual political agreements with each and every single one of your nation-states may prove to be impractical. It would be easier if I could make arrangements on an international level with all of humanity instead. If we decide to go that route through one organization or another, do we have questions or concerns in that regard?}
The human crowd immediately burst into chaos.
Dolus smirked. He raised his hands and motioned downward as if he were conducting an orchestra. {One at a time, please!}
"What exactly is this Solar Atlas Pact of yours?" asked a politician.
Another raised their hand. "Why exactly do you want us to immediately join it?"
{It's an economic and military alliance of sorts.} answered Dolus, leaning against one of his arms. {We formed it with some sthara threatened by the Hegemony. Mutual self-defense. To streamline things, it's more like what humans may refer to as a confederacy if only to help coordinate and centralize our military forces, among other things.}
"So humanity would lose its sovereignty if we joined it?" asked a journalist recording everything.
Dolus shrugged. {Just a little!}
"That'd be outrageous!" said an American man with a southern tang. "We didn't just fight an entire alien invasion off for y'all to annex us!"
{I mean, it wouldn't be hard.} said Dolus with a toothy grin. {Hypothetically, I could order my berserkers to overthrow your governments and replace them with new ones. Maybe I could even implement some sort of planetwide human federation of nations.} He smirked and kicked his feet in the air. {Wouldn't that be way easier?}
Multiple humans reacted with anything from shock, confusion, and anger.
"I don't believe that would be wise." replied an Indian diplomat in a calm tone.
Dolus cocked his horned head a little to the side. {Why not?}
The diplomat crossed his arms. "Theoretically, we still have enough nuclear missiles to render this entire planet uninhabitable. Some can even strike your fleets. If we can't have this planet, then I suppose no one can if you're actually suggesting the idea of betraying and conquering us."
Before the rest of the humans could be whipped into a frenzy, Dolus shook his head and held up his hands. {I made that suggestion as a jest!} he said, laughing a little. {A mere joke! Quite unprofessional on my part due to… cultural and linguistic differences. Or something.} He recomposed himself, closing and opening his icy blue eyes. {But more seriously, it would be an exercise in insanity if we tried to immediately integrate a species that just got introduced to the galactic community through an alien invasion. Forgive me for the mere suggestion; I've just been finding this process frustrating. I mean… I don't believe their leader or a representative is here, but do you honestly think that one Korean country among others would ever agree to have their nation-state absorbed into my little confederacy?}
The room remained silent for a while as others coughed or glared at one another.
Dolus clasped his hands together. {Right! Regardless of whether you join, the Solar Atlas Pact would be more than happy to act as mediators and guides as we assist your species with rebuilding and recovering on your homeworld!}
A Polish representative with a red and white flag pin cleared his throat. "Actually, mediation is what some of us have been wanting to discuss."
"For now." said a Ukrainian man. "You see, Russian military forces helped us repel invading alien forces from our territory, but now they won't leave certain parts of it." He glared at the Russian delegation with daggers in his eyes. "Members from their apparent military junta should be here if they want to try explaining that one to everyone else."
A Russian general adorned with medals stood from his seat. "It's a mere misunderstanding." he said, gradually looking at everyone in the room. "We completely pulled out of Poland. If we were going to annex them again, we would have come to an agreement with Germany to partition them first."
A dreary German woman rolled her eyes and sneered. "Really?"
"As for some nations such as Ukraine," continued the general, "We are only protecting Russian speaking minorities within their territory since their own governments failed to do so."
All attention got redirected towards Dolus, who yawned at their words. {Ah… so… do minor territorial disputes really matter when we're discussing the fate of your entire species?}
"Didn't you just say you were going to act as a mediator?" asked the Ukrainian.
Dolus's tails shot up. {Well, of course!} He leaned forward and narrowed his eyes. {Whatever your borders were before the Hegemony's invasion will be respected and enforced by my berserkers.} He looked at the Russian general. {Do we have a mutual understanding?}
Without saying anything, the general stared at Dolus and sat back down.
{Which reminds me.} said Dolus, rolling his shoulders. {The aftermath of this crisis will be a nightmare for everyone involved. Although the Hegemony backed down and things haven't escalated into a full-blown war since they have their own internal issues to contend with, there's also the matter of the abductions and the eradication of your infrastructure leading to mass anarchy. A few human governments surrendered to the Hegemony. Relief efforts from SAP are already underway, but there are some things even I don't have the power to prevent…}
"I thought the Hegemony wanted to exchange prisoners?" asked a spokesman. "Why would they do that otherwise?"
Others in the crowd whispered or murmured among one other.
{I don't know.} answered Dolus in a cold tone. {My sources say they abducted anywhere from a few hundred thousand to millions of humans during their retreat. They allegedly have no interest in returning them. Negotiations have generally been strained in that regard due to our current policy of eventually killing any captured zenari warriors, so I doubt that will go anywhere.}
One general slammed a fist against a table. "Why aren't you counter-attacking them to begin with?!"
Dolus tilted his head up. {Pragmatism. Logistics. It's better to negotiate from a position of strength, and SAP doesn't necessarily have the manpower or resources to invade the Hegemony. We did nothing but give them a bloody nose by fending them off, really.}
"But their empress got blown up by one of our nukes!" exclaimed one delegate. "One of their client species is rebelling!"
{Irrelevant.} replied Dolus. {If anything else, that all gave me a chance to de-escalate things and guarantee the independence of your species.} His tails wagged behind him as he made a more devious smile. {It's a real shame regarding what happened to Janessa the third, though! I loved talking to her and watching her bury herself or her own people. Unfortunately, I can't capitalize on her death or the subsequent umok rebellion without those opportunistic mactarians supporting us first.}
A human woman raised an eyebrow. "Huh?"
"A… mactarian?" parroted another man.
In response, Dolus made a dismissive motion with a free hand. {Another alien species.}
More holograms projected images of worlds with all-encompassing oceans and few islands. Aquatic farms cultivated fish, plankton, and algae en masse. Creatures with webbed hands and feet had an uncanny resemblance to bipedal sharks as they swam through the water with the assistance of their finned tails. Additionally, a complete lack of irises and the color white making up the center of one of their eyes gave off an appearance similar to something far more predatory and primal.
{And yes, they're almost as large as us.} resumed Dolus. {Their so-called Free League is a collection of republic equivalents situated between SAP and Hegemony territory. Nebulas make it hard to traverse. Despite their… pirate problem… SAP has granted them associate status for trade alongside forming a mutual defense pact. They will come to our aid in the Hegemony invades, but they refuse to support an invasion of the Hegemony itself, putting us all in an awkward deadlock where we can't invade the Hegemony without their support, while the Hegemony has been hesitating to attack us both at the same time.}
Many human delegates simply gawked at the bizarre sight of anthropomorphic sharks with leathery hide ranging anywhere from red, orange, or purple until the hologram disappeared altogether.
{Speaking of which, I'd like to make humanity a similar offer!} said Dolus, standing from his seat and placing a hand on his chest. {Human independence will be respected. Through one political body or another, whether it be a newly formed UN or the World Trade Organization, I'd like for the Solar Axis Pact to one day commence trade with the nations of Earth. We will protect your planet if a majority of human countries agree to a similar mutual self-defense pact.}
An older man with a turban crossed his arms. "So what's the catch?"
{For starters, you'd have to come to our aid if the Hegemony attacked the Solar Axis Pact.} explained Dolus, making circular motions with one hand. {But we aren't expecting much in that regard. No offense.}
More humans piped up one at a time, some voices being drowned out by the others.
"And…?"
"Sounds too good to be true."
"Can you be trusted?"
"There has to be more of a price to pay than that."
{AND…} said Dolus, silencing his human chorus. {SAP might request a few… privileges.}
"Concessions." said a man with dark skin.
{Privileges!} asserted Dolus with a thump of his foot. {They might be temporary, but they would be necessary to carry out any agreements. We would like to use a few moons orbiting planets you refer to as Jupiter and Saturn as naval bases, supply depots, or other installations. Especially one called Titan. This would allow our fleets to protect your solar system more effectively against incursions, while the asteroid belt and Earth itself would serve as effective fallback points.}
The assembled humans whispered or momentarily spoke among one another.
Dolus fluttered his eyes. {And if it's not too much to ask, we might also station a limited number of berserkers and scientists on your planet for defensive or research purposes. It could also be a nice cultural exchange. Besides the possibility of joint military exercises, the presence of SAP military forces will be essential if I'm allowed to establish an embassy in Iceland!}
One human pushed up their glasses. "Uh… why Iceland?"
{It's isolated, and the climate is preferable for my species...} answered Dolus, looking away. {Making it ideal for me if I ever visited your planet in-person!}
"Yeah, but places like Belgium or Switzerland are traditionally used for that."
Most attention got directed towards the Icelandic representative, who tensed up and blushed a bit. "Um. We'd be honored to host his majesty! If he were to establish an embassy in an agreed upon location, pending permission from others…"
{Excellent!} exclaimed Dolus with his twin tails wagging. {Then I believe that covers everything I'd like to discuss for the time being. To implement these measures, would a simple verbal agreement with a majority vote suffice for now until we can establish something more official in the future?}
Almost everyone tried to speak at the same time, making Dolus recoil a little.
"Agreed!"
"Alien soldiers still on our planet?"
"It's not like we were using those other planets!"
Dolus motioned downward as they slowly stopped speaking. {Either that or we can raise our hands in the air to indicate that you support the propositions I made today.}
One at a time, human hands shot up. It took some time, but this soon culminated in a massive majority of the representatives or other leaders raising their hands with few exceptions. The mere sight resulted in a more mischievous smile from Dolus as he locked his hands together, his silky smooth voice filling the air once more.
{Perfect! Then all is going according to plan…}
~~~~~
A teenage zenari girl with bright blue eyes and scarlet red scales shivered. "I do not think I am qualified for this..."
"Neither was your sister." said an older zenari man, nearly identical to his daughter besides his golden eyes. "Look what happened to her when she refrained from listening to my advice. No empress acts alone, my dear."
She broke eye contact. "But… you said an empress might be tutored and taught for years if not centuries before they take the throne."
"Emphasis on the word might." he replied, holding up a clawed finger. "In dire circumstances like this, Malyni, you might be forced to become an empress early."
Malyni glanced at the ground. "What if I do not want to?" She held up her arms, where her gold-embroidered sleeves fit loosely around them. "This outfit is tacky and I think it is too big…"
The zenari man crouched down to get on a more even eye level and snarled. "Do not ever say that again. This is your birthright! If the potential stress or responsibilities are concerning you, remember what I said. No empress acts alone. Other lower nobles and other high ranking military officers have been keeping order and for now you will be nothing but the Hegemony's face."
At his words, Malyni blinked a few times. "What does that mean?"
"A figurehead, my dear." he hissed, placing an arm on her shoulder. "I will be acting as your regent until you come of age in several solar cycles."
"But what about the umok, the humans, and whatever happened to my older sister…"
The man pressed a finger against her snout. "All taken care of, my dear. Most umok have remained loyal and fleets with eight super dreadnoughts are ending their rebellion as we speak. As for the humans, they are better off being left alone. Your sister losing one of our priceless precursor ships and her own life against them has been humiliating enough already, even if we still have a dozen or so to spare, plus the joraxians are now protecting them too."
Malyni placed a hand against her head. "But…"
"Just do as I say and all will be well." said the man, patting her on the back. "Now let us not keep everyone waiting. It is not going to be like traditional coronation ceremonies, so time is not a resource we can afford to waste."
"As you wish, father." said Malyni in a weak tone.
With that, she followed him out of an ornate room lined with ceremonial clothing. They traversed down an adjacent hallway with truly stunning architecture. Most of the structure was composed of stone or steel with many columns or pillars to accommodate giant beings such as themselves. Heraldry and other emblems lining the walls symbolized the Hegemony and the empress herself.
Sthara servants, zenari butlers, and umok underlings attended to the needs of the palace. Malyni bypassed them as they tidied up the general area or replaced the previous empress's physical or digital images. Eventually, she reached a narrow corridor. She stopped in place for a mere moment but ultimately followed her father to a balcony overlooking an area directly in front of the palace.
What Malyni saw only made her paralyzed.
Crowds were assembled outside the palace grounds. Ships, including an outright dreadnought, were in low orbit as they hovered above her in the sky. Unlike any previous ceremonies, zenari warriors were all over the place as they kept the crowd in check or otherwise secured the palace grounds. Similarly titanic structures from the bustling urban surroundings were visible in the far distance, some of which resembled spires challenging the skyline, a feat of engineering in and of itself. Before Malyni could even contemplate turning back, she looked over her shoulder, spotting a pair of elite zenari vanguards blocking the only way back into the palace.
A combination of her father gently pushing on her backside and an umok gesturing at Malyni forced her forward, despite the blood draining from her scales. Countless people, including those on-world or off-world, watched the ceremony thanks to camera drones floating around the palace. Yet another custom golden throne with other decorations sat in the center of the balcony itself, prompting Malyni to sit on it, albeit it was a bit too large for her to fill completely.
Nonetheless, an umok placed a crown on Malyni's head.
A familiar cry echoed from countless people throughout the arid landscape of the zenari homeworld…
"THE EMPRESS IS DEAD. LONG LIVE THE EMPRESS!"
They were historic words filling the pages of history for many species, but humanity earned a special spot for making such an event possible through one simple truth.
Pride always arises before it leads to one's destruction.
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An umok auxiliary gave a blank stare as he looked at a flaming car. Unfortunately, half the vehicle remained missing thanks to a car bomb, which crippled his taloned foot as he sat inert on a concrete road. A crowd of humans, including both soldiers and civilians, watched on or screamed at him as he did nothing but release weak chirping sounds from his chipped beak. Meanwhile, a construction crane behind him went about looping a steel cable around his neck, creating a makeshift noose as hydraulics lifted it towards the sky.
Pressure tightened the cable.
The assembled crowd went wild.
Some screamed vulgarities as if the mere pawn caused all their problems.
From there, the umok choked and gasped for air, up until he departed from this world like all his other comrades.
~~~~~
{So I'm merely speaking to… representatives.} said King Dolus, hand cupping his chin. His hologram stayed around the same size as the other well-dressed humans in the room. {If that's the case, I assume that most of your leaders didn't survive the initial zenari assault, or they otherwise went missing?}
A human wearing a green uniform befitting for a general stepped forward. "Either that or we had to take control until a civilian government could be re-established."
Dolus rolled his eyes and sighed. {Lovely.} He walked a little, flicking his twin tails. {And your so-called United Nations?}
"Dissolved." said a woman wearing a black dress.
{Well... that just complicates things.}
After saying this, Dolus returned to sitting on an ornate chair. He crossed his legs. Although his slim outfit had a more formal appearance, its more minimalistic design with a V-neck collar exposed a tuft of white fur on his chest. Not to mention footwraps rendering his digitigrade toes visible. The assembled group of a few hundred or so humans surrounding his hologram projector included anything from military, religious, or civilian leaders crowding a worn-down auditorium.
{Here's the primary problem…} resumed Dolus, breaking the silence. {Your species isn't united like my own. Trying to do individual political agreements with each and every single one of your nation-states may prove to be impractical. It would be easier if I could make arrangements on an international level with all of humanity instead. If we decide to go that route through one organization or another, do we have questions or concerns in that regard?}
The human crowd immediately burst into chaos.
Dolus smirked. He raised his hands and motioned downward as if he were conducting an orchestra. {One at a time, please!}
"What exactly is this Solar Atlas Pact of yours?" asked a politician.
Another raised their hand. "Why exactly do you want us to immediately join it?"
{It's an economic and military alliance of sorts.} answered Dolus, leaning against one of his arms. {We formed it with some sthara threatened by the Hegemony. Mutual self-defense. To streamline things, it's more like what humans may refer to as a confederacy if only to help coordinate and centralize our military forces, among other things.}
"So humanity would lose its sovereignty if we joined it?" asked a journalist recording everything.
Dolus shrugged. {Just a little!}
"That'd be outrageous!" said an American man with a southern tang. "We didn't just fight an entire alien invasion off for y'all to annex us!"
{I mean, it wouldn't be hard.} said Dolus with a toothy grin. {Hypothetically, I could order my berserkers to overthrow your governments and replace them with new ones. Maybe I could even implement some sort of planetwide human federation of nations.} He smirked and kicked his feet in the air. {Wouldn't that be way easier?}
Multiple humans reacted with anything from shock, confusion, and anger.
"I don't believe that would be wise." replied an Indian diplomat in a calm tone.
Dolus cocked his horned head a little to the side. {Why not?}
The diplomat crossed his arms. "Theoretically, we still have enough nuclear missiles to render this entire planet uninhabitable. Some can even strike your fleets. If we can't have this planet, then I suppose no one can if you're actually suggesting the idea of betraying and conquering us."
Before the rest of the humans could be whipped into a frenzy, Dolus shook his head and held up his hands. {I made that suggestion as a jest!} he said, laughing a little. {A mere joke! Quite unprofessional on my part due to… cultural and linguistic differences. Or something.} He recomposed himself, closing and opening his icy blue eyes. {But more seriously, it would be an exercise in insanity if we tried to immediately integrate a species that just got introduced to the galactic community through an alien invasion. Forgive me for the mere suggestion; I've just been finding this process frustrating. I mean… I don't believe their leader or a representative is here, but do you honestly think that one Korean country among others would ever agree to have their nation-state absorbed into my little confederacy?}
The room remained silent for a while as others coughed or glared at one another.
Dolus clasped his hands together. {Right! Regardless of whether you join, the Solar Atlas Pact would be more than happy to act as mediators and guides as we assist your species with rebuilding and recovering on your homeworld!}
A Polish representative with a red and white flag pin cleared his throat. "Actually, mediation is what some of us have been wanting to discuss."
"For now." said a Ukrainian man. "You see, Russian military forces helped us repel invading alien forces from our territory, but now they won't leave certain parts of it." He glared at the Russian delegation with daggers in his eyes. "Members from their apparent military junta should be here if they want to try explaining that one to everyone else."
A Russian general adorned with medals stood from his seat. "It's a mere misunderstanding." he said, gradually looking at everyone in the room. "We completely pulled out of Poland. If we were going to annex them again, we would have come to an agreement with Germany to partition them first."
A dreary German woman rolled her eyes and sneered. "Really?"
"As for some nations such as Ukraine," continued the general, "We are only protecting Russian speaking minorities within their territory since their own governments failed to do so."
All attention got redirected towards Dolus, who yawned at their words. {Ah… so… do minor territorial disputes really matter when we're discussing the fate of your entire species?}
"Didn't you just say you were going to act as a mediator?" asked the Ukrainian.
Dolus's tails shot up. {Well, of course!} He leaned forward and narrowed his eyes. {Whatever your borders were before the Hegemony's invasion will be respected and enforced by my berserkers.} He looked at the Russian general. {Do we have a mutual understanding?}
Without saying anything, the general stared at Dolus and sat back down.
{Which reminds me.} said Dolus, rolling his shoulders. {The aftermath of this crisis will be a nightmare for everyone involved. Although the Hegemony backed down and things haven't escalated into a full-blown war since they have their own internal issues to contend with, there's also the matter of the abductions and the eradication of your infrastructure leading to mass anarchy. A few human governments surrendered to the Hegemony. Relief efforts from SAP are already underway, but there are some things even I don't have the power to prevent…}
"I thought the Hegemony wanted to exchange prisoners?" asked a spokesman. "Why would they do that otherwise?"
Others in the crowd whispered or murmured among one other.
{I don't know.} answered Dolus in a cold tone. {My sources say they abducted anywhere from a few hundred thousand to millions of humans during their retreat. They allegedly have no interest in returning them. Negotiations have generally been strained in that regard due to our current policy of eventually killing any captured zenari warriors, so I doubt that will go anywhere.}
One general slammed a fist against a table. "Why aren't you counter-attacking them to begin with?!"
Dolus tilted his head up. {Pragmatism. Logistics. It's better to negotiate from a position of strength, and SAP doesn't necessarily have the manpower or resources to invade the Hegemony. We did nothing but give them a bloody nose by fending them off, really.}
"But their empress got blown up by one of our nukes!" exclaimed one delegate. "One of their client species is rebelling!"
{Irrelevant.} replied Dolus. {If anything else, that all gave me a chance to de-escalate things and guarantee the independence of your species.} His tails wagged behind him as he made a more devious smile. {It's a real shame regarding what happened to Janessa the third, though! I loved talking to her and watching her bury herself or her own people. Unfortunately, I can't capitalize on her death or the subsequent umok rebellion without those opportunistic mactarians supporting us first.}
A human woman raised an eyebrow. "Huh?"
"A… mactarian?" parroted another man.
In response, Dolus made a dismissive motion with a free hand. {Another alien species.}
More holograms projected images of worlds with all-encompassing oceans and few islands. Aquatic farms cultivated fish, plankton, and algae en masse. Creatures with webbed hands and feet had an uncanny resemblance to bipedal sharks as they swam through the water with the assistance of their finned tails. Additionally, a complete lack of irises and the color white making up the center of one of their eyes gave off an appearance similar to something far more predatory and primal.
{And yes, they're almost as large as us.} resumed Dolus. {Their so-called Free League is a collection of republic equivalents situated between SAP and Hegemony territory. Nebulas make it hard to traverse. Despite their… pirate problem… SAP has granted them associate status for trade alongside forming a mutual defense pact. They will come to our aid in the Hegemony invades, but they refuse to support an invasion of the Hegemony itself, putting us all in an awkward deadlock where we can't invade the Hegemony without their support, while the Hegemony has been hesitating to attack us both at the same time.}
Many human delegates simply gawked at the bizarre sight of anthropomorphic sharks with leathery hide ranging anywhere from red, orange, or purple until the hologram disappeared altogether.
{Speaking of which, I'd like to make humanity a similar offer!} said Dolus, standing from his seat and placing a hand on his chest. {Human independence will be respected. Through one political body or another, whether it be a newly formed UN or the World Trade Organization, I'd like for the Solar Axis Pact to one day commence trade with the nations of Earth. We will protect your planet if a majority of human countries agree to a similar mutual self-defense pact.}
An older man with a turban crossed his arms. "So what's the catch?"
{For starters, you'd have to come to our aid if the Hegemony attacked the Solar Axis Pact.} explained Dolus, making circular motions with one hand. {But we aren't expecting much in that regard. No offense.}
More humans piped up one at a time, some voices being drowned out by the others.
"And…?"
"Sounds too good to be true."
"Can you be trusted?"
"There has to be more of a price to pay than that."
{AND…} said Dolus, silencing his human chorus. {SAP might request a few… privileges.}
"Concessions." said a man with dark skin.
{Privileges!} asserted Dolus with a thump of his foot. {They might be temporary, but they would be necessary to carry out any agreements. We would like to use a few moons orbiting planets you refer to as Jupiter and Saturn as naval bases, supply depots, or other installations. Especially one called Titan. This would allow our fleets to protect your solar system more effectively against incursions, while the asteroid belt and Earth itself would serve as effective fallback points.}
The assembled humans whispered or momentarily spoke among one another.
Dolus fluttered his eyes. {And if it's not too much to ask, we might also station a limited number of berserkers and scientists on your planet for defensive or research purposes. It could also be a nice cultural exchange. Besides the possibility of joint military exercises, the presence of SAP military forces will be essential if I'm allowed to establish an embassy in Iceland!}
One human pushed up their glasses. "Uh… why Iceland?"
{It's isolated, and the climate is preferable for my species...} answered Dolus, looking away. {Making it ideal for me if I ever visited your planet in-person!}
"Yeah, but places like Belgium or Switzerland are traditionally used for that."
Most attention got directed towards the Icelandic representative, who tensed up and blushed a bit. "Um. We'd be honored to host his majesty! If he were to establish an embassy in an agreed upon location, pending permission from others…"
{Excellent!} exclaimed Dolus with his twin tails wagging. {Then I believe that covers everything I'd like to discuss for the time being. To implement these measures, would a simple verbal agreement with a majority vote suffice for now until we can establish something more official in the future?}
Almost everyone tried to speak at the same time, making Dolus recoil a little.
"Agreed!"
"Alien soldiers still on our planet?"
"It's not like we were using those other planets!"
Dolus motioned downward as they slowly stopped speaking. {Either that or we can raise our hands in the air to indicate that you support the propositions I made today.}
One at a time, human hands shot up. It took some time, but this soon culminated in a massive majority of the representatives or other leaders raising their hands with few exceptions. The mere sight resulted in a more mischievous smile from Dolus as he locked his hands together, his silky smooth voice filling the air once more.
{Perfect! Then all is going according to plan…}
~~~~~
A teenage zenari girl with bright blue eyes and scarlet red scales shivered. "I do not think I am qualified for this..."
"Neither was your sister." said an older zenari man, nearly identical to his daughter besides his golden eyes. "Look what happened to her when she refrained from listening to my advice. No empress acts alone, my dear."
She broke eye contact. "But… you said an empress might be tutored and taught for years if not centuries before they take the throne."
"Emphasis on the word might." he replied, holding up a clawed finger. "In dire circumstances like this, Malyni, you might be forced to become an empress early."
Malyni glanced at the ground. "What if I do not want to?" She held up her arms, where her gold-embroidered sleeves fit loosely around them. "This outfit is tacky and I think it is too big…"
The zenari man crouched down to get on a more even eye level and snarled. "Do not ever say that again. This is your birthright! If the potential stress or responsibilities are concerning you, remember what I said. No empress acts alone. Other lower nobles and other high ranking military officers have been keeping order and for now you will be nothing but the Hegemony's face."
At his words, Malyni blinked a few times. "What does that mean?"
"A figurehead, my dear." he hissed, placing an arm on her shoulder. "I will be acting as your regent until you come of age in several solar cycles."
"But what about the umok, the humans, and whatever happened to my older sister…"
The man pressed a finger against her snout. "All taken care of, my dear. Most umok have remained loyal and fleets with eight super dreadnoughts are ending their rebellion as we speak. As for the humans, they are better off being left alone. Your sister losing one of our priceless precursor ships and her own life against them has been humiliating enough already, even if we still have a dozen or so to spare, plus the joraxians are now protecting them too."
Malyni placed a hand against her head. "But…"
"Just do as I say and all will be well." said the man, patting her on the back. "Now let us not keep everyone waiting. It is not going to be like traditional coronation ceremonies, so time is not a resource we can afford to waste."
"As you wish, father." said Malyni in a weak tone.
With that, she followed him out of an ornate room lined with ceremonial clothing. They traversed down an adjacent hallway with truly stunning architecture. Most of the structure was composed of stone or steel with many columns or pillars to accommodate giant beings such as themselves. Heraldry and other emblems lining the walls symbolized the Hegemony and the empress herself.
Sthara servants, zenari butlers, and umok underlings attended to the needs of the palace. Malyni bypassed them as they tidied up the general area or replaced the previous empress's physical or digital images. Eventually, she reached a narrow corridor. She stopped in place for a mere moment but ultimately followed her father to a balcony overlooking an area directly in front of the palace.
What Malyni saw only made her paralyzed.
Crowds were assembled outside the palace grounds. Ships, including an outright dreadnought, were in low orbit as they hovered above her in the sky. Unlike any previous ceremonies, zenari warriors were all over the place as they kept the crowd in check or otherwise secured the palace grounds. Similarly titanic structures from the bustling urban surroundings were visible in the far distance, some of which resembled spires challenging the skyline, a feat of engineering in and of itself. Before Malyni could even contemplate turning back, she looked over her shoulder, spotting a pair of elite zenari vanguards blocking the only way back into the palace.
A combination of her father gently pushing on her backside and an umok gesturing at Malyni forced her forward, despite the blood draining from her scales. Countless people, including those on-world or off-world, watched the ceremony thanks to camera drones floating around the palace. Yet another custom golden throne with other decorations sat in the center of the balcony itself, prompting Malyni to sit on it, albeit it was a bit too large for her to fill completely.
Nonetheless, an umok placed a crown on Malyni's head.
A familiar cry echoed from countless people throughout the arid landscape of the zenari homeworld…
"THE EMPRESS IS DEAD. LONG LIVE THE EMPRESS!"
They were historic words filling the pages of history for many species, but humanity earned a special spot for making such an event possible through one simple truth.
Pride always arises before it leads to one's destruction.
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It's over! It's finally over!
Oh no, it's over...
What a journey. I've been following along for some time now and I'm glad to have read the series. Through all the snags, hurdles, and bad days you made it to the end. And you made it on a nice even 30 chapters. I'm very excited to see what the future holds for you as a writer.
"The sun machine is coming down, and we're gonna have a party..."
Oh no, it's over...
What a journey. I've been following along for some time now and I'm glad to have read the series. Through all the snags, hurdles, and bad days you made it to the end. And you made it on a nice even 30 chapters. I'm very excited to see what the future holds for you as a writer.
"The sun machine is coming down, and we're gonna have a party..."
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachme.....inallyover.mp4
So, there's a lot I'd like to say in one comment, but I'd rather not write an essay. I'd like to thank everyone who stuck with me through this thing and supported me until the end. I didn't intend for this series to take nearly two years, it just turned into something of a personal nightmare at some point due to its origins as a spite project and some of the ensuing petty squabbles. I'm incredibly stubborn though, so I saw it through to the end and forced myself to write it despite any setbacks, just might have potentially burned out a bit during the process.
Could it have been better? Probably. I'm content with ending things here for now until I potentially return to the setting in the future. Otherwise, Ishtar's story is over. I might also make a lore document for the small community that developed around the setting since some expressed interest in writing their own stories set within it. The goal with this story since its inception was always to take size differences, play them straight by writing a serious story, then make people feel bad for Ishtar. Not sure if it was a mistake or not since it all revolves around the whole macro fetish and I might have been better off doing something more explicit like Felarya rather than the odd blend of things, but ultimately I wanted to see some more mostly SFW and PG13 macro/micro interactions in a series where it all played into the storytelling and worldbuilding.
Here's the discord server for those interested...
https://discord.gg/m7f9jT5hYb
I may or may not take a break. What I do in the future is up in the air, either gonna start with a rewrite of an old novel or I might ironically start from a clean slate with a new macro/micro scifi setting inspired by the Stellaris titanic lifeforms event. Until then!
So, there's a lot I'd like to say in one comment, but I'd rather not write an essay. I'd like to thank everyone who stuck with me through this thing and supported me until the end. I didn't intend for this series to take nearly two years, it just turned into something of a personal nightmare at some point due to its origins as a spite project and some of the ensuing petty squabbles. I'm incredibly stubborn though, so I saw it through to the end and forced myself to write it despite any setbacks, just might have potentially burned out a bit during the process.
Could it have been better? Probably. I'm content with ending things here for now until I potentially return to the setting in the future. Otherwise, Ishtar's story is over. I might also make a lore document for the small community that developed around the setting since some expressed interest in writing their own stories set within it. The goal with this story since its inception was always to take size differences, play them straight by writing a serious story, then make people feel bad for Ishtar. Not sure if it was a mistake or not since it all revolves around the whole macro fetish and I might have been better off doing something more explicit like Felarya rather than the odd blend of things, but ultimately I wanted to see some more mostly SFW and PG13 macro/micro interactions in a series where it all played into the storytelling and worldbuilding.
Here's the discord server for those interested...
https://discord.gg/m7f9jT5hYb
I may or may not take a break. What I do in the future is up in the air, either gonna start with a rewrite of an old novel or I might ironically start from a clean slate with a new macro/micro scifi setting inspired by the Stellaris titanic lifeforms event. Until then!
The battle for Earth is finally over and closed with golden key.
God what a final, it was a long journey, and from the ashes a new and better future arrives.
I loved the dynamics between Malyni and her father it's so sweet, it's a relief to know that Janessa expeditionary force destruction had little impact on the hegemony and everything will be stable, and with order re-established now with wiser and more competent governing, I could not ask for a better final.
God what a final, it was a long journey, and from the ashes a new and better future arrives.
I loved the dynamics between Malyni and her father it's so sweet, it's a relief to know that Janessa expeditionary force destruction had little impact on the hegemony and everything will be stable, and with order re-established now with wiser and more competent governing, I could not ask for a better final.
It was one heck of a ride. I really loved this story. You did a great job!!! Quick question, if I may. Will you, by any chance, post the rest of the chapters on the story concerning the hydra girl and the human boy? I am asking because I see a lot of potential for it, and also because there are no other good stories for Female hydra/male human pairings. None, and I have searched the entirety of this site looking for good hydra stories. Yours is probably the first and only decent one I have found. I really hope you decide to reupload it. I beg of you, please download the rest of that great story. I want to read it so bad.
I always appreciate any praise. I've said it before, but I had some serious qualms with Strange Bedfellows as a whole. I suppose uploading the twenty or so chapters of that series is still a possibility, but it'd need some serious tweaks or edits on my part before I consider it "post-worthy" so to speak. Which I might not necessarily be willing to do. However, there's a small trick you can do to read some of my old old stuff before I purged the whole reddit presence.
https://www.removeddit.com/r/HFY/co.....bedfellows_ii/
Just find a link to a deleted post and modify the URL to removeddit, problem is that it shows raw text such as reddit formatting codes too. Which you can copy and paste to a word processing program such as Microsoft Word before removing all instances if it bothers you I suppose.
https://www.reddit.com/r/hfy/wiki/a.....s/retroinferno
My old wiki on the subreddit isn't up to date and it might take some digging to find the links to all twenty chapters, but it's better than nothing. I also found some Russians trying to sell Strange Bedfellows to college students on some writing prompt website thing. Nice reminder that anything you put on the internet will stay around forever.
https://www.removeddit.com/r/HFY/co.....bedfellows_ii/
Just find a link to a deleted post and modify the URL to removeddit, problem is that it shows raw text such as reddit formatting codes too. Which you can copy and paste to a word processing program such as Microsoft Word before removing all instances if it bothers you I suppose.
https://www.reddit.com/r/hfy/wiki/a.....s/retroinferno
My old wiki on the subreddit isn't up to date and it might take some digging to find the links to all twenty chapters, but it's better than nothing. I also found some Russians trying to sell Strange Bedfellows to college students on some writing prompt website thing. Nice reminder that anything you put on the internet will stay around forever.
I would like to see the continuation of the story of the human with the alien doc, and how the humans will evolve in this federation of giant alien race, or also stories of human who learn to evolve in this new world, with the giant alien. But first of all, you just finished a story, so take the time to breathe...
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J'aimerais voir la suite de l'histoire de l'humaine avec le doc alien, et comment les humains vont évoluer dans cette fédération de race alien géante, ou aussi des histoires d'humain qui apprend à évoluer dans ce nouveau monde, avec l'alien géant. Mes avant toute chose, vous venez de terminer une histoire, alors prenez le temps de respirer...
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J'aimerais voir la suite de l'histoire de l'humaine avec le doc alien, et comment les humains vont évoluer dans cette fédération de race alien géante, ou aussi des histoires d'humain qui apprend à évoluer dans ce nouveau monde, avec l'alien géant. Mes avant toute chose, vous venez de terminer une histoire, alors prenez le temps de respirer...
Interesting, so the Hegemony has a Small Council controlling a teenage empress too young and naive without any experience plopped on the throne as their figurehead. I'm curious how strong the matriarchal rule runs in the Zenari and Joraxxian socities. Sexual dimorphism was greater in the Zenari society but males like Deimos hold some form of respectable position even if an honored role like battlemaster was restricted to the larger females. Janessa's older male relative (uncle, cousin, or brother?) couldn't outright claim the throne, but he is able to act as regent as long as he acts like he's simply warming the seat for his daughter; either because the small council group let him or because he can still control his impressionable daughter. I'm curious about the Joraxxians since I think all the troops we've seen have been female berserkers. Do their males hold an equal role or either have restricted rights in their society or the females just keep their shorter boy toys out of harms way. Bringing us to Dolas. Does he rule alone or is he just the public stand-in for his Queen whose either too busy or unwilling to be the public face?
I hope you continue the series again soon with another arc. Curious to see how you develop humanity in this space opera setting. Earth prime space humans in a coalition with aliens fighting a different alien coalition with their own captured and coerced human population is just such a new take on the genre and has so much potential. Plus I'm squirming not getting to know what the unseen alien threat the Precursors made the macro species to fight for in the past that Deimos hints is still out there and they might not be prepared for at all with all the space races divided as they are. Teasing us with fluff like that, are you a GW 40k writer? Do you think you'd focus on the perspective of an everyday worker, soldier, or young adult human in a continuation or let us get glimpses of the bigger picture with the inner monologue of a leader impacting the future of humanity? Similar to how we saw things from Janessa's viewpoint?
I hope you continue the series again soon with another arc. Curious to see how you develop humanity in this space opera setting. Earth prime space humans in a coalition with aliens fighting a different alien coalition with their own captured and coerced human population is just such a new take on the genre and has so much potential. Plus I'm squirming not getting to know what the unseen alien threat the Precursors made the macro species to fight for in the past that Deimos hints is still out there and they might not be prepared for at all with all the space races divided as they are. Teasing us with fluff like that, are you a GW 40k writer? Do you think you'd focus on the perspective of an everyday worker, soldier, or young adult human in a continuation or let us get glimpses of the bigger picture with the inner monologue of a leader impacting the future of humanity? Similar to how we saw things from Janessa's viewpoint?
I don't think it got brought up in the series, but Dolus was part of a forced arranged marriage with a significantly older joraxian woman. She's bedridden now and Dolus more or less rules in her place with a similar regent scenario. Both zenari and joraxians are matriarchal, but zenari still allow men to have somewhat equal privileges while the rights of males in joraxian societies are more restricted. Hopefully I can potentially clarify more fluff like that in a worldbuilding document, assuming I ever stop being lazy about it and do one.
>Are you a GW 40k writer?
I'd have start trying to trademark macro furries in a scifi setting first. But yeah, the precursors of the setting created the LGM species to be living weapons of mass destruction against another alien threat that may or may not still exist. Perhaps I can do short stories or another series with more perspectives if I ever wanted to dripfeed more worldbuilding and whatnot, but for now things are finished and I may or may not return to this stuff in the future.
>Are you a GW 40k writer?
I'd have start trying to trademark macro furries in a scifi setting first. But yeah, the precursors of the setting created the LGM species to be living weapons of mass destruction against another alien threat that may or may not still exist. Perhaps I can do short stories or another series with more perspectives if I ever wanted to dripfeed more worldbuilding and whatnot, but for now things are finished and I may or may not return to this stuff in the future.
Im gonna go ahead and say that I thoroughly enjoyed this. I’m not sure I can articulate how much I enjoyed the story. These last few chapters were especially good some of the scenes either had me on edge like that battle where Ishtar finally falls in battle or Dolus “negotiating” with the remaining human leadership. Or had me feeling chills like the scene in this part where the Umok is hanged via crane. Although the uncertain future of humanity has me a little anxious I guess that’s the HFY in me talking.
Overall great story. I’ll be coming back to this at least once per year.
Overall great story. I’ll be coming back to this at least once per year.
Congratulations on completing your story. To keep this story going for thirty chapters is quite an impressive achievement. Like you said before, is this story perfect? Of course not. Then again, nothing is 100% perfect, or else you will never get it done. The point is to learn; To improve. If you wish to take up professional writing one day, then this is the right path. If you are doing this for fun/hobby, it's perfect for honing your silks, like any artist.
As for the story itself, it's self; it was entertaining. The worst thing you can do is leave the reader with a sense that they wasted their time. The reason I didn't feel that was because of your characters, mainly Ishtar. She was a controversial figure, and you handed her well. It is evident in peoples reaction to her death as many cried but just as many cheered. The reason this happened was you SHOWED us her story. I believe the prime reason it worked was that you showed us her 'Human' side alongside her sadistic side. So, like Jamie Lannister, we end up supporting the character. When you introduce the reader to Ishtar in Chapter 2, she saves Wyatt. First impressions always last, and our first impression of Ishtar was protecting a child and caring for it like a mother. THEN, you show us her more sadistic side. It makes her a tragic villain rather than just a monster whose sole motivation is a total commitment to being a bastard.
I look forward to seeing more of your work. To see what lessons you've learnt from this to use to make your next story fantastic.
As for the story itself, it's self; it was entertaining. The worst thing you can do is leave the reader with a sense that they wasted their time. The reason I didn't feel that was because of your characters, mainly Ishtar. She was a controversial figure, and you handed her well. It is evident in peoples reaction to her death as many cried but just as many cheered. The reason this happened was you SHOWED us her story. I believe the prime reason it worked was that you showed us her 'Human' side alongside her sadistic side. So, like Jamie Lannister, we end up supporting the character. When you introduce the reader to Ishtar in Chapter 2, she saves Wyatt. First impressions always last, and our first impression of Ishtar was protecting a child and caring for it like a mother. THEN, you show us her more sadistic side. It makes her a tragic villain rather than just a monster whose sole motivation is a total commitment to being a bastard.
I look forward to seeing more of your work. To see what lessons you've learnt from this to use to make your next story fantastic.
I couldn't agree more. This is technically my third novel too! I consider this story significantly better than my previous series, plus it's the first time I received fanart for one. I'm just my own worst critic and I'll continue doing this as a fun hobby to hone my skills.
Nonetheless, thanks for all the feedback so far, I find it encouraging!
Nonetheless, thanks for all the feedback so far, I find it encouraging!
The diplomat crossed his arms. "Theoretically, we still have enough nuclear missiles to render this entire planet uninhabitable. Some can even strike your fleets. If we can't have this planet, then I suppose no one can if you're actually suggesting the idea of betraying and conquering us."
Fuck yea say it!
Fuck yea say it!
liked it on the whole. Just not the part where people lose, etc. As for me, people should, if not win, then fight on equal terms and so on. And overcoming the problems there to continue the struggle, etc. I love Warhammer 40k for that. For there people are shown in all the glory of character. They are fighting a dozen alien races, gods and other dangers. There they overcome adversity and yes they can suffer losses and lose, but in the end they stand and eventually defeat any enemy. And yes, I don't want to humiliate your work, but I just fantasized a lot that your Hegemony would be opposed to the factions of vakhi.
so.
the first Tau.
well, zenari will be able to defeat them, because Tau are not numerous, strong only in ranged combat and one of the weakest factions of the Vakhi. only it is worth remembering that Tau in a long-range battle can take apart even heavy Zenari ships for sure with prolonged fire, because they beat hard from afar. But so Zenari will not be difficult to break them.
Next come the Eldar.
Well, it's difficult here. On the one hand, the Hegemony will win a direct battle easily. That's just the Eldar do not like a protracted battle, but like to attack unexpectedly and hide before they are discovered. And they are quite technologically advanced.
Their ships are fast and on solar sails. If they impose their tactics with constant strikes and waste on zenari ships, then they will suffer heavy losses because their large hulking ships are just a great target, unlike small, invisible and fast Eldar. And yes, the Eldar are faster than hegemony ships in any case, because the Eldar have solar sails and their ships literally float and move quickly. But I think the Hegemony will win in a long conflict.
Necrons.
Perhaps the Hegemony will definitely lose to these guys. The Necrons are very advanced and their ships and technology are very strong. And they also have a lot of artifacts.
And most importantly, they have a Gaussian weapon. It is able to pass through the shields and burn through the body of the box. That is, no shields will help.
And such guns will easily kill even healthy zenari. For the Gaussian gun literally dezentegrates the flesh molecules by tearing them off. That is, after being hit by the victim, only the skeletons of the burned remains. That is, such a gun figs who to burn - a person or a 30-foot creature. The effect is one killer.
The hegemony will not be able to defeat the race that once destroyed the real almost God-eternal.
Orcs.
It's very difficult here. Orcs are clearly not to be defeated because they are very dangerous, numerous and damn multiply by spores. That is, he killed one and ten will be raised in return. And they have just huge ships that the Hegemony will envy. For example, huge space wanderers and even pancake attacking moons. Moons turned into a spaceship! Yes, it will make any fleet shudder. One such moon can destroy the capital of the Hegemony or half the fleet. And in general, Orcs can simply ram Hegemony ships on huge ships. At the same time, it is unlikely that the Orcs will be able to destroy their ships quickly. For orcs do not like ranged combat as a Hegemony, but they love armor.
They have it more than other races in 5 or even 10. And according to the description, it is clear that the Hegemon ships are good at skirmishes, but they will hold blows very badly because of their design with the object of the ram. And an orc ship the size of a ship similar to the Hegemony can just ram through it and fly on.
Here the Hegemony will have to hold on with all its might against the green eternal WAAAGH!
Tyranids. - this is the kind of threat that the Hegemon can just swallow and not notice. For Tyrants possess bio-absorption. They are not a race, they are a bio-living system. That is, they adapt the dna of the vran and biomass from under themselves. That is, when they meet 30-foot enemies, they can absorb their dna and once and tyranids will spawn crowds of 30-100-foot beetles. Tyranids are the strongest and most terrible Warhammer race and they will be able to simply swarm through the Hegemony of the whole and only leave bones and digested worlds.
Chaos. - it will be a threat to Hegemony. For Chaos can use huge forces of warp and psychic energy. Or even without taking the warp into account, then chaos can simply seduce the soldiers of the Hegemony and zenari. For all living beings are confirmed by the influence of Chaos. Even the orcs. And half of the Hegemony fleet will simply go over to the side of Chaos. Such phenomena are common for Chaos. For example, Nurglites in general can literally make huge animals rot alive. Virus and disease don't care what height you are and therefore Nurgle's diseases can mow down a lot of zenari troops. In general, Chaos is the one who will be able to overcome the Hegemony, mainly from within.
Imperium - as I said, the Imperium can resist all of the above factions at once. That is, imperim is the kind of space states of people that can at least not give up positions to the Hegemon. Externatus can destroy Hegemon planets and bases without the need for an assault. Imperium troops and especially imperial Titans can crush Zenari armies in one gulp. Psykers will generally be able to disassemble dozens of zenari in minutes. And fighters like, for example, any primarch will be able to calmly defeat any representative of zenari and Hegemony and even defeat the ruler and queen of Hegemony. For the primarch can fight on an equal footing with the god chaos. With the real God that not an army, but one on his own can bend the world under himself and it will be like just having breakfast for him. Such a god, anyone can crush the queen of Hegemony with a finger and not notice, and the primarchs are able to wave at the same time on an equal footing with the gods and at least cause damage to them.
And once again, I do not blame and respect your work. I just love wahoo and it's hard not to compare it with Hegemony.
so.
the first Tau.
well, zenari will be able to defeat them, because Tau are not numerous, strong only in ranged combat and one of the weakest factions of the Vakhi. only it is worth remembering that Tau in a long-range battle can take apart even heavy Zenari ships for sure with prolonged fire, because they beat hard from afar. But so Zenari will not be difficult to break them.
Next come the Eldar.
Well, it's difficult here. On the one hand, the Hegemony will win a direct battle easily. That's just the Eldar do not like a protracted battle, but like to attack unexpectedly and hide before they are discovered. And they are quite technologically advanced.
Their ships are fast and on solar sails. If they impose their tactics with constant strikes and waste on zenari ships, then they will suffer heavy losses because their large hulking ships are just a great target, unlike small, invisible and fast Eldar. And yes, the Eldar are faster than hegemony ships in any case, because the Eldar have solar sails and their ships literally float and move quickly. But I think the Hegemony will win in a long conflict.
Necrons.
Perhaps the Hegemony will definitely lose to these guys. The Necrons are very advanced and their ships and technology are very strong. And they also have a lot of artifacts.
And most importantly, they have a Gaussian weapon. It is able to pass through the shields and burn through the body of the box. That is, no shields will help.
And such guns will easily kill even healthy zenari. For the Gaussian gun literally dezentegrates the flesh molecules by tearing them off. That is, after being hit by the victim, only the skeletons of the burned remains. That is, such a gun figs who to burn - a person or a 30-foot creature. The effect is one killer.
The hegemony will not be able to defeat the race that once destroyed the real almost God-eternal.
Orcs.
It's very difficult here. Orcs are clearly not to be defeated because they are very dangerous, numerous and damn multiply by spores. That is, he killed one and ten will be raised in return. And they have just huge ships that the Hegemony will envy. For example, huge space wanderers and even pancake attacking moons. Moons turned into a spaceship! Yes, it will make any fleet shudder. One such moon can destroy the capital of the Hegemony or half the fleet. And in general, Orcs can simply ram Hegemony ships on huge ships. At the same time, it is unlikely that the Orcs will be able to destroy their ships quickly. For orcs do not like ranged combat as a Hegemony, but they love armor.
They have it more than other races in 5 or even 10. And according to the description, it is clear that the Hegemon ships are good at skirmishes, but they will hold blows very badly because of their design with the object of the ram. And an orc ship the size of a ship similar to the Hegemony can just ram through it and fly on.
Here the Hegemony will have to hold on with all its might against the green eternal WAAAGH!
Tyranids. - this is the kind of threat that the Hegemon can just swallow and not notice. For Tyrants possess bio-absorption. They are not a race, they are a bio-living system. That is, they adapt the dna of the vran and biomass from under themselves. That is, when they meet 30-foot enemies, they can absorb their dna and once and tyranids will spawn crowds of 30-100-foot beetles. Tyranids are the strongest and most terrible Warhammer race and they will be able to simply swarm through the Hegemony of the whole and only leave bones and digested worlds.
Chaos. - it will be a threat to Hegemony. For Chaos can use huge forces of warp and psychic energy. Or even without taking the warp into account, then chaos can simply seduce the soldiers of the Hegemony and zenari. For all living beings are confirmed by the influence of Chaos. Even the orcs. And half of the Hegemony fleet will simply go over to the side of Chaos. Such phenomena are common for Chaos. For example, Nurglites in general can literally make huge animals rot alive. Virus and disease don't care what height you are and therefore Nurgle's diseases can mow down a lot of zenari troops. In general, Chaos is the one who will be able to overcome the Hegemony, mainly from within.
Imperium - as I said, the Imperium can resist all of the above factions at once. That is, imperim is the kind of space states of people that can at least not give up positions to the Hegemon. Externatus can destroy Hegemon planets and bases without the need for an assault. Imperium troops and especially imperial Titans can crush Zenari armies in one gulp. Psykers will generally be able to disassemble dozens of zenari in minutes. And fighters like, for example, any primarch will be able to calmly defeat any representative of zenari and Hegemony and even defeat the ruler and queen of Hegemony. For the primarch can fight on an equal footing with the god chaos. With the real God that not an army, but one on his own can bend the world under himself and it will be like just having breakfast for him. Such a god, anyone can crush the queen of Hegemony with a finger and not notice, and the primarchs are able to wave at the same time on an equal footing with the gods and at least cause damage to them.
And once again, I do not blame and respect your work. I just love wahoo and it's hard not to compare it with Hegemony.
Really amazing story you made here. Glad I was finally able to get around to reading it.
Sorry to see it had to start out of spite and that it turned into a nightmare, but you did some great work.
It's nice to see that you did leave some things open so you could return to it if you ever wanted to.
Sorry to see it had to start out of spite and that it turned into a nightmare, but you did some great work.
It's nice to see that you did leave some things open so you could return to it if you ever wanted to.
I doubt anyone will see this comment, but this was a bitter-sweet ending for me. This story was amazing and reading it was an absolute blast. I honestly don’t care what she did or how she acted, Ishtar was my favorite character. I loved her “Split personality” between being a warrior and being an adoptive mother. At the end of the day, at least to me, she was just a lonely woman who just wanted to be a mother again but also followed orders no matter what. Her death has genuinely left me deeply saddened. I’m glad she did the right thing with Su- Wyatt and Visaly. At least she went out fighting like a true warrior. R.I.P Ishtar.
Well...I’ll just have to guess what would happen if all the people really transferred to the Hegemony. Like, what would "re-education" look like, what would people's lives look like in it, would their stay be normal or would they survive (Since I'm sure there will be a lot of Zenari who want to torture people)? I myself am from Russia, so this work was closer to me (well, I’m writing through Google translator).
Very appropriate line to end on. While too much pride can be a hindrance, the same can be said for not having any.
I hope Malyni can do a better job than her sister and be less of an arrogant brat. I also hope she doesn't find out what happened to her.
Dolus at first made me think he didn't take his position seriously enough but Im starting to wonder if his humor is a way to test others.
This has been an awesome story and I enjoyed reading every bit of it! Its certainly bittersweet in a few ways but I know not all stories can be happy and not everyone in them can have a happy ending. I look forward to reading more of your work!
I hope Malyni can do a better job than her sister and be less of an arrogant brat. I also hope she doesn't find out what happened to her.
Dolus at first made me think he didn't take his position seriously enough but Im starting to wonder if his humor is a way to test others.
This has been an awesome story and I enjoyed reading every bit of it! Its certainly bittersweet in a few ways but I know not all stories can be happy and not everyone in them can have a happy ending. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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