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Category Story / TF / TG
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 102px
File Size 5.7 kB
I think the only thing I didn't really like about this story was that it ended very abruptly after the transformation. I would have liked a longer post-TF text, to see a little more of Keisha and what would become of her life from now on. Perhaps to see that meeting she was talking about and see her interact with the neighbors. It might also have been nice to know where that email came from, who sent it, and why she transformed Joseph into a nidoqueen.
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