I changed a lot about this page. I totally took out the shower comment at the end for multiple reasons, the biggest being that it was totally unnecessary. I dunno. both the Gerudo chick (the dalmation) and Andrés just seem too nice for thieves in this version. also, the dragon messenger seemed to chicken shit and all that.

additionally, a Dalmation just didnt seem right to be a member of a group of desert thieves. although I moved her onto the first page in my original remake (I only did that one page), I did away with her altogether in my current remake.

I think I do a much better job of potraying how Andrés feels in the new comic. (Andrés rubbing his forehead in the second to last frame does show up in place of the first frame of the next page)