I think it's a very competently done trance-style track, with a fairly anthemic feel to its progression. There is a general feel that it's been done before, but it isn't a bad track. Maybe come up with some unique twists or trademarks to make it a more interesting or awakening track. I can't really advise too much as I'm not sure what direction you're deciding on, it's entirely your decision. Good luck with the rest anyway, not bad so far. :)

Thanks, I really didn't have a particular direction for this song. The idea just sorta popped in my head a few hours ago, and I decided to act upon it. I'll probably add something to make it a little more interesting to listen to, later on. Thanks for the comment!!!

Another great thumbnail! And epic song!

Thanks!

sounds great X-Factor.
keep up the great work

ack! it stopped ! O.o why did it stop DX