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When I first saw the picture 'She Didn't Like The Flowers', posted by 
PanHesekielShiroi I knew I had to do a poem to it. I asked, and she graciously allowed for it's use.
The original is here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4370289
A few words on this poem you will read; it is short, it is stark, and it is truthful. Blink your eyes and you will see both sides (male and female) presented. Only a blessed few have not been down this pathway and sat upon the bench.
If you are not watching Pan, please give her gallery a look see - I think she's wonderful.
enjoy...
Vixyy
PanHesekielShiroi I knew I had to do a poem to it. I asked, and she graciously allowed for it's use.The original is here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4370289
A few words on this poem you will read; it is short, it is stark, and it is truthful. Blink your eyes and you will see both sides (male and female) presented. Only a blessed few have not been down this pathway and sat upon the bench.
If you are not watching Pan, please give her gallery a look see - I think she's wonderful.
enjoy...
Vixyy
Category Poetry / All
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I was thinking of something like this : http://www.silver-wire.org/unsorted.....theflowers.mp3 only with bass during the 'choruses' to accentuate the malady, and violins during the angry part to accentuate the emotional undertow.
I have to pick up someone at the airport, or I'd have recorded something decent. Oh well.. at least it shows what I meant. :)
I have to pick up someone at the airport, or I'd have recorded something decent. Oh well.. at least it shows what I meant. :)
I often write about death and violence and such... but quite rarely about rejection or divorce... for some reason, death seems to be somehow... easier to accept. Because often there wouldn't have been any other possibility. And I have come to believe that when we die, there is no part that is left to ponder: What if I had done something different? But rejection or divorce and how a person handles that sort of a thing... they say that a divorce is emotionally comparable to a death of a near relative.
The poem touched me. I can sort of feel the depression... "she didn't like the flowers"... my dark imagination has already weaved the next sentence: "I have bought a gun."
Damn, I can be macabre at times... but yeah, excellent piece of work, I enjoyed this a lot. Keep it up.
The poem touched me. I can sort of feel the depression... "she didn't like the flowers"... my dark imagination has already weaved the next sentence: "I have bought a gun."
Damn, I can be macabre at times... but yeah, excellent piece of work, I enjoyed this a lot. Keep it up.
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