
Skyler's unfortunate slip-up near Willow's windmills knocks him off his feet, and unconscious, before the house of a doctor by the name of Well. After being examined, he is given a book that further explains the phenomenon that has been affecting him and the Midgar pigs. But will it help when he goes up against Matthew?
Comments are appreciated. All caught up with the chapters for now, yay! Hope you didn't wait too long for them.
~ KT
Comments are appreciated. All caught up with the chapters for now, yay! Hope you didn't wait too long for them.
~ KT
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 29.5 kB
ooooh... this is still really good... >< i wanna' punch Matthew right in his fat piggy face though. and i'd do it too, if i weren't afraid of losing a paw to him x.x;;;;;; but i can't wait for the next bit. it's really cool, and i liked the big guy, Well. he seems nice, but part of me suspects that this won't be the last we see of him.
Story's coming along well so far. I like that you provide some quantitative indication of Skyler's size and growth to help the reader better understand exactly how much change he's gone through. It would be great if you find a way to do that periodically! As I've said before, the adventure game influence is apparant in this story (not that that's a bad thing!). Boss battle!
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! it's awsome hun, in fact my cousin works for sonny ;) not very big part of it but he said he may actualy consider making this into a game when its finished ;) but hes not sure what his boss would say, if you want that is. They will probably need your permission as well. Just a thought
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