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light-the-lucario and
nebari Something of an introduction for Draylen, in first person, and yes, I'm probably going to be an actual introduction for him. Maybe. I don't know. Backstory, anyway.
At any rate, I suppose this is also to give a preview of my writing ability. Or lack thereof. Anywho, review, tell me what you think, and please, be honest. It's really not all that good, I know that.
Also... I'm marking this as general, but... should the rating be higher? I'm really not sure... advice would be useful. It's not like there's anything I would call obscene in it, but considering their dessert... I don't know.
light-the-lucario and
nebari Something of an introduction for Draylen, in first person, and yes, I'm probably going to be an actual introduction for him. Maybe. I don't know. Backstory, anyway.At any rate, I suppose this is also to give a preview of my writing ability. Or lack thereof. Anywho, review, tell me what you think, and please, be honest. It's really not all that good, I know that.
Also... I'm marking this as general, but... should the rating be higher? I'm really not sure... advice would be useful. It's not like there's anything I would call obscene in it, but considering their dessert... I don't know.
Category Story / All
Species Western Dragon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 30 kB
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