Interesting training concept!

I liked this piece, good work.

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

First off, good to see you writing again. And second, excellent story. I love the way the story goes with this one. Congrats.

Hehe, it only took two months to write that little thing >.>

Great story! I really liked the twist with it.

Glad you liked it!

Ouch ouch ouch everything scrunched together. MY EYES!

Spaces between paragraphs, complete thoughts, and dialogue PLEASE!

In the mean time I'm formatting it myself so I can make it easier to read, then I'll comment on the actual story, but as it is, I can't read it.

Ya, I forget that just because office 2010 adds the spaces doesn't mean they're actual spaces. Sorry about that. >.<

Hope this is better, sorry again! >.<

Awesome story ^..^
Small but well written.
Perhaps another could be done up.

Ya, I've been leaning more to the short side lately just because I've had stories that dragged out unnecessarily. I'm glad you enjoyed this one though!

i really like this. its got a nice twist and an interesting and sweet ending. good job.

Thank you. I'm glad everyone's getting a kick out of how the story goes.

Is There More?

Unfortunately not, but I may do more vore stories later!

Not that I could read it, I must say job well done. Nice ending and climax. Keep up the good work. :)

Thanks, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it once it was readable for you. Means a lot getting compliments for my work! :D

Hehe, very satisfied dragon indeed. Makes me wonder if he could stay in her stomach while she hunts for something else, then teleport out again once she’s got a better meal. Probably wouldn’t do so willingly though >.>

Nice story, an excellent read, and hey! It even has tags!

very good very very good

is she the one who made that awosme vore animation

Amazing story, abit short but great for an introduction of the two characters. I truly hope you continue and make a series out of this... even if writing them takes awhile. You did this one well enough to get the reader to fall in love with both characters and im sure everyone else will agree. Maybe have him continue to try and learn at the academy and continue to get guidence from her and him help feed her in return or something... lure someone or find a deer lol either way would be great! Especially when it comes time for him to test thevreformation spell :P lol bet there be resorvations from him on that one lol