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The gangs all here (story included)
WARNING!!! THIS STORY CONTAINS LOTS OF DESCRIPTIONS OF BLOOD AND GORE!! PLEASE DO NOT READ IF YOU DONT HANDLE HORROR/BLOOD VERY WELL!!!
The air in the basement was heavy. Giggles echoed off of the walls.
Ropes strained, blood dripped, whimpers filled the room.
A Grey pegasus, by the name of Derpy Whooves, flew around their new display of friendship. Looking down at her murderous family. Consisting of Pinkiepie, Inkie pie, Blinkie Pie, MInkie Pie and Applebloom.
Pinkie was cleaning off the blood from their most recent harvest, her flat hair swaying with each movement. Her ears pricked up as she heard another whimper, looking up at their display.
On raised platforms, were the remaining elements of harmony.
Applejack was nailed down in a laying down position. A rope was tied around her neck to keep her sitting upright, blood flowed from her head and dripped from her face, running down her crossed front hooves. Her cutiemarks were missing, and were hanging to dry by thick strings at the bottom of the platform she was on. Her hair was also cut short, as well as her tail. Her body covered in bruises.
Next to applejack was Rainbow Dash. She was positioned in a very prideful position. Her front hooves crossed, as she stood on her back legs, hooves also bolted to her own platform. Her neck and hooves were strapped to the ceiling with ropes, keeping her upright, it also made her head tilt upward to look that little bit extra egotistical. Her cutiemarks were also hanging from her platforms. Blood trickled down Rainbow's back legs, the liquid crimson also flowed down Rainbow's open, drooped wings. Bruises all over her legs, she had takes quite the beating during their "playtime".
Fluttershy was sat in a more hidden position. Her wings spread to hide herself like she would if she were alive. Rope was also tied around her neck to keep her sat upright, and she too had her cutiemarks removed. Her mane was a mess and her tail was also cut short so it was easier to work with.
Rarity was put in a rather show-off like pose. Her head held high, her front hoof propped up and her other legs spread for balance. Rope was tied around her muzzle, and tied to the ceiling to keep rarity's head propped up. There was also some rope tied around her torso to keep her boy straight, and her front hoof was tied up to keep it in the desired position. Her hooves were also bolted to the floor.
Blood ran down her legs from the exposed muscle on her flanks, as well as down her front legs from another injury.
The centrepiece, the only pony left alive, was Princess Twilight Sparkle. She wasn't nailed down to a platform, but she was hanging from the ceiling, all 4 of her legs were tied in a position to make her look like she was naturally flying, and there was a rope around her neck to keep her head still. It wasn't tight enough to choke her to death, but it was enough to prevent any movement. Her wings were also clamped shut with some rope.
Blood flowed from her broken horn and down her face, nearly getting into her open eyes, which were held open with safety pins. Her chest, as well as everyone else's, had stitches, as different organs were taken for harvest. Twilights vital organs were left behind, and they took the not so needed ones. Such as a singular lung and a kidney. The alicorn princess let out a small whimper as she moved her eyes around, looking at her dead friends before her, tears mixing with her own blood, and flowing down her neck.
The pink ex-party pony, walked up a conveniently placed ladder, looking twilight in the eye before finally speaking.
"Isnt it lovely twilight? Friendship preserved forever! just like you wanted!! and soon enough, more of your friends will be joining you!"
She let out a giggle, and the other ponies joined in too, before they gathered around a book that was opened on the ground.
"So what do ya'll think? Who do you think we'll draw next?" Applebloom asked. As she walked into the light, Twilight noticed that she had got her Cutiemark. But it wasn't anything like Twilight had imagined. Her cutiemark was a shiny red apple, with a kitchen knife stuck into the side, Twilight then looked over at Applejack, and put 2 and 2 together. Her eyes widening in shock and disgust.
"Im not so sure, Maybe we should pick one more playmate from Ponyville before expanding out to Canterlot... That way the disappearances wont be as noticeable, and worry wont rise as quickly."
Minkie Pie mentioned. Her voice so quiet, that Twilight could only just hear her.
Derpy gave an excited hop as she landed, the blood on her hooves splattering below her. "OO! Can i do the next draw?! Derpy wants to do the next draw!!"
Pinkie looked at her sisters before they all noddes, handing the number jar to Derpy.
They grey pegasus gave a wide smile before wiping her hoof clean on her chest fluff. Slowly reaching into the jar and pulling out a slip of paper at random.
Blinkie pie loked at the paper and smirked, speaking up enough for the princess to hear them.
"Spike huh? Seems like fate has really been on our side!"
The family of murderers laughed out loud, some falling onto their backs, others stamping their hooves. Once the laughter had died down, the only thing left was Twilight's whimpering, as they walked toward the stairs of their basement with the bucket of blood and organs, ready to make their next batch of sweet treats. All of them, with an intimidating smile on their face.
This story was inspired by the audio story series: Muffins.
All cannon MLP characters belong to Hasbro,
Minkie Pie belongs to the stories rightful creator: Reitanna Seishin - on youtube
Please go check out her stories, they're all very very well written
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The air in the basement was heavy. Giggles echoed off of the walls.
Ropes strained, blood dripped, whimpers filled the room.
A Grey pegasus, by the name of Derpy Whooves, flew around their new display of friendship. Looking down at her murderous family. Consisting of Pinkiepie, Inkie pie, Blinkie Pie, MInkie Pie and Applebloom.
Pinkie was cleaning off the blood from their most recent harvest, her flat hair swaying with each movement. Her ears pricked up as she heard another whimper, looking up at their display.
On raised platforms, were the remaining elements of harmony.
Applejack was nailed down in a laying down position. A rope was tied around her neck to keep her sitting upright, blood flowed from her head and dripped from her face, running down her crossed front hooves. Her cutiemarks were missing, and were hanging to dry by thick strings at the bottom of the platform she was on. Her hair was also cut short, as well as her tail. Her body covered in bruises.
Next to applejack was Rainbow Dash. She was positioned in a very prideful position. Her front hooves crossed, as she stood on her back legs, hooves also bolted to her own platform. Her neck and hooves were strapped to the ceiling with ropes, keeping her upright, it also made her head tilt upward to look that little bit extra egotistical. Her cutiemarks were also hanging from her platforms. Blood trickled down Rainbow's back legs, the liquid crimson also flowed down Rainbow's open, drooped wings. Bruises all over her legs, she had takes quite the beating during their "playtime".
Fluttershy was sat in a more hidden position. Her wings spread to hide herself like she would if she were alive. Rope was also tied around her neck to keep her sat upright, and she too had her cutiemarks removed. Her mane was a mess and her tail was also cut short so it was easier to work with.
Rarity was put in a rather show-off like pose. Her head held high, her front hoof propped up and her other legs spread for balance. Rope was tied around her muzzle, and tied to the ceiling to keep rarity's head propped up. There was also some rope tied around her torso to keep her boy straight, and her front hoof was tied up to keep it in the desired position. Her hooves were also bolted to the floor.
Blood ran down her legs from the exposed muscle on her flanks, as well as down her front legs from another injury.
The centrepiece, the only pony left alive, was Princess Twilight Sparkle. She wasn't nailed down to a platform, but she was hanging from the ceiling, all 4 of her legs were tied in a position to make her look like she was naturally flying, and there was a rope around her neck to keep her head still. It wasn't tight enough to choke her to death, but it was enough to prevent any movement. Her wings were also clamped shut with some rope.
Blood flowed from her broken horn and down her face, nearly getting into her open eyes, which were held open with safety pins. Her chest, as well as everyone else's, had stitches, as different organs were taken for harvest. Twilights vital organs were left behind, and they took the not so needed ones. Such as a singular lung and a kidney. The alicorn princess let out a small whimper as she moved her eyes around, looking at her dead friends before her, tears mixing with her own blood, and flowing down her neck.
The pink ex-party pony, walked up a conveniently placed ladder, looking twilight in the eye before finally speaking.
"Isnt it lovely twilight? Friendship preserved forever! just like you wanted!! and soon enough, more of your friends will be joining you!"
She let out a giggle, and the other ponies joined in too, before they gathered around a book that was opened on the ground.
"So what do ya'll think? Who do you think we'll draw next?" Applebloom asked. As she walked into the light, Twilight noticed that she had got her Cutiemark. But it wasn't anything like Twilight had imagined. Her cutiemark was a shiny red apple, with a kitchen knife stuck into the side, Twilight then looked over at Applejack, and put 2 and 2 together. Her eyes widening in shock and disgust.
"Im not so sure, Maybe we should pick one more playmate from Ponyville before expanding out to Canterlot... That way the disappearances wont be as noticeable, and worry wont rise as quickly."
Minkie Pie mentioned. Her voice so quiet, that Twilight could only just hear her.
Derpy gave an excited hop as she landed, the blood on her hooves splattering below her. "OO! Can i do the next draw?! Derpy wants to do the next draw!!"
Pinkie looked at her sisters before they all noddes, handing the number jar to Derpy.
They grey pegasus gave a wide smile before wiping her hoof clean on her chest fluff. Slowly reaching into the jar and pulling out a slip of paper at random.
Blinkie pie loked at the paper and smirked, speaking up enough for the princess to hear them.
"Spike huh? Seems like fate has really been on our side!"
The family of murderers laughed out loud, some falling onto their backs, others stamping their hooves. Once the laughter had died down, the only thing left was Twilight's whimpering, as they walked toward the stairs of their basement with the bucket of blood and organs, ready to make their next batch of sweet treats. All of them, with an intimidating smile on their face.
This story was inspired by the audio story series: Muffins.
All cannon MLP characters belong to Hasbro,
Minkie Pie belongs to the stories rightful creator: Reitanna Seishin - on youtube
Please go check out her stories, they're all very very well written
COMMISSIONS ARE STILL OPEN 24/7
Link to prices are here
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/42022589/
All rules, TOS and refund info for my commissions can be found here:
https://bryony6210.carrd.co/
Come on and join my Discord server too!!
https://discord.gg/PswFVZ6FJk
Category Artwork (Digital) / Scenery
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yeah, i will admit, i think the muffins series needed a lot of work done, and maybe they should have stuck to having the other mane 6's being individual deaths instead of trying to cram fluttershy, rarity and twilight's in, in 1 go.
But it was fun to listen to at the time, and actually helped my love of MLP grimdark/creepy pasta stories!
But it was fun to listen to at the time, and actually helped my love of MLP grimdark/creepy pasta stories!
Oh I agree. I'm glad rewrites are being done and people are basically taking it into their own hands.
Honestly there's like fifty main character deaths in some chapters and it's so busy. There's a good reading of Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle's chapter by Isaacblooms on YT now. I kind of just wanted to see it all end myself.
Honestly there's like fifty main character deaths in some chapters and it's so busy. There's a good reading of Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle's chapter by Isaacblooms on YT now. I kind of just wanted to see it all end myself.
Yeah, especially since in the chapter with Applejack's death, its mentioned that Applebloom was planning on going after Sweetebelle and Scootaloo. and the idea of getting Bab's seed involved and having her make her own muffins in Manehatton, i loved.
To be honest, my main goal is to one day, have someone do an audio reading of one of my stories or series. Or even dub over one of my comics! To be honest, that'd make me so so happy! I love audio readings, i listen to "TheLostNarrator" all the time as well as her wife "MagpiePony" and i cant get enough of their story readings.
To be honest, my main goal is to one day, have someone do an audio reading of one of my stories or series. Or even dub over one of my comics! To be honest, that'd make me so so happy! I love audio readings, i listen to "TheLostNarrator" all the time as well as her wife "MagpiePony" and i cant get enough of their story readings.
Personally I think they should have only used the number system or just removed it entirely because Rei couldn't commit.
Plus Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle totally won the game.
I think Chaos Day was the worst myself. Minkie's frail as hell so no way she could run around with chains and armor and rip all the heads off.
I've had several of my stories read and put on Youtube back when I was famous for my fanfiction(then people got super aggressive for ten years and I removed most of it and yelled for most -not all- to be taken down) the seriousness of people who read a story going too far gets scary.
Plus Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle totally won the game.
I think Chaos Day was the worst myself. Minkie's frail as hell so no way she could run around with chains and armor and rip all the heads off.
I've had several of my stories read and put on Youtube back when I was famous for my fanfiction(then people got super aggressive for ten years and I removed most of it and yelled for most -not all- to be taken down) the seriousness of people who read a story going too far gets scary.
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