Just wrote this today. Thought I'd upload it to see what people like about it. All constructive criticism is welcome.

This is just a basic story beginning in a world a friend of mine have been creating through song and now word. Let me know what you think, and if there's any grammar errors.

Ideas copyright  jeauno And me

Song inspiriation for some of it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VPWjaPstKTI