Note: Revised version of a story I had previously submitted with a major change of events that I am more satisfied with compared to what I had written in the older document. The older version can be found in my scraps folder.
Anyway, that being said...
My second piece of Pokemon fanfiction about one of my fat pokemon OCs! This time, we learn about Taelyr, a female flygon who works as a sideshow performer for the Mirai Traveling Carnival as a unique dual 'fat mon' and 'strongmon' act, under the title, "The Sumo Strongmon." I thought the idea of an extremely obese strongman act was very unique, so I incorporated that into Taelyr's character.
To further flesh out the world the story is set in, I decided to add a prejudice aspect, with Erik's apprehension toward Taelyr for her obesity. I experimented with his initial reaction toward her, and his later realization after witnessing her true strength. I have never been bullied - nor do I wish to know what it feels like! - but I figure that this is as close as I can get. Hopefully, I did not make Erik look too bad, nor did I make his change of mind too abrupt.
I also hope I sounded optimistic enough in Taelyr's monologue.
If you liked what I wrote, remember to leave a comment about what you liked and what you think I can improve upon! I am open to constructive criticism.
All species of pokemon featured in this story are copyright of Nintendo and The Pokemon Company.
All characters featured in this story are copyright of FatalCalamityz - me!
4/10/2022 update: 500+ views? Are you serious!??! :O Thank you all so, so much!
Anyway, that being said...
My second piece of Pokemon fanfiction about one of my fat pokemon OCs! This time, we learn about Taelyr, a female flygon who works as a sideshow performer for the Mirai Traveling Carnival as a unique dual 'fat mon' and 'strongmon' act, under the title, "The Sumo Strongmon." I thought the idea of an extremely obese strongman act was very unique, so I incorporated that into Taelyr's character.
To further flesh out the world the story is set in, I decided to add a prejudice aspect, with Erik's apprehension toward Taelyr for her obesity. I experimented with his initial reaction toward her, and his later realization after witnessing her true strength. I have never been bullied - nor do I wish to know what it feels like! - but I figure that this is as close as I can get. Hopefully, I did not make Erik look too bad, nor did I make his change of mind too abrupt.
I also hope I sounded optimistic enough in Taelyr's monologue.
If you liked what I wrote, remember to leave a comment about what you liked and what you think I can improve upon! I am open to constructive criticism.
All species of pokemon featured in this story are copyright of Nintendo and The Pokemon Company.
All characters featured in this story are copyright of FatalCalamityz - me!
4/10/2022 update: 500+ views? Are you serious!??! :O Thank you all so, so much!
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Pokemon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 45.7 kB
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