I like it. Reminds me of a piece I wrote a while back involving another stupidly dangerous planet and idiots trying to explore "What man was not meant to know"...

There are formatting issues, but these can be dealt with easily. Just make sure your spoken lines start a new paragraph unless it's the same person speaking after a bit of exposition and you should be able to clear up the "noise" in your style. ^_^

A suitably chilling piece, sounds like they should have sent done a little more checking first ;)

short and sweet... well done...

V.