Okay first off I have to say I like how the back view of the girl turned out, and like how the dog turned out. ONly problemw as I'm not entirely sure if I got the characters right! The two at the upper left are supposed to mean "Come On" and the two next to the doggies head are supposed to mean "Huff, Huff." So please tell me if I'm wrong! LOL!

As a final note I hope you like it  CaptainJusticeVirtsuoso the paper I was using didn't like me and as I drew and cut away I noticed that the picture was getting smaller and I was running out of room... so if you don't I'll happily redraw it for you!

Dialogue:
Masuyo: Come on you lazy bum! If you don't hurry up we'll lose the yokai again!
Toboe: *huff, huff* I'm sorry I'm sorry! Maybe if you'd quit running!

(I was poking fun that Toboe is outta shape xD like a lazy house dog! So please tell me if you enjoy!)