Really nice crisp line work, what are you using to color with? You may want to smooth them out with a blending stick. It softens the harsher penciled lines into a more consistent tone they come in a variety if sizes and are fairly inexpensive, you should give them a try.
I find them invaluable in my pencil sketches.
Keep up the awesome progress my friend!
--Rick

Awesome tip thanks, I was just using some cheap pencils, I can't even remember the name of, something like Color Brand or such.
They are basically the crappy ones you get to use at a Dr's Office, I need new ones but can't afford them.

Use what works!
If those are the only thing you have at the moment, Use them! It's all good.
Those did a very decent job, sure you may not have access to top of the line color pencils at the moment, but don't let that stop you.
The important thing is to have fun and over time improve.

We are our own worst critic, it has taken me Years to finally tell that inner voice to shut up! It may not be "perfect" but it represents another step on that path. In other words, it's good enough for now. Being a "Traditional Artist" I don't have an "undo" button. I have an eraser! And like most artists I've talked with we all tend to be a bit of a perfectionist. Learning when n to STOP is hard. But too much fussing with it can destroy it. It's a hard lesson to learn, so no worries.

Keep up the good work my friend, this is your journey, enjoy it!

--Rick

Very dynamic.

Thank you