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I just got really tired of not having anything new.
It's just some practice, and it really highlights where I need the practice : P
It's just some practice, and it really highlights where I need the practice : P
Category All / General Furry Art
Species Canine (Other)
Size 1200 x 1200px
File Size 572.7 kB
not sure if you're still looking for input on this. I'm always a little reluctant to give critique, cause some people don't like to hear it, I guess?
The parts of the body are fairly well drawn, though if there were parts I'd readdress...yeah. The tush and his far leg. Particularly just the back leg looks too short. Then, the upper torso/ hips-below appear very fragmented. His upper torso is just too big to fit his lower half. Really easy fixes, all of them, if you use programs that can transform selectable portions. This is all if you're going for realistic-like proportions.
another thing to note, if you are, is he is leaning a hellavu lot for the spacing/placement of his feet. I'd nab the foot in the front, tug it forward so that he looked balanced. Otherwise if you were going for the "potential topple," you really got the suggestion he can flop over any second. As stated, all the pieces are really accurate in the drawing, just the size relations need to be tweaked.
The parts of the body are fairly well drawn, though if there were parts I'd readdress...yeah. The tush and his far leg. Particularly just the back leg looks too short. Then, the upper torso/ hips-below appear very fragmented. His upper torso is just too big to fit his lower half. Really easy fixes, all of them, if you use programs that can transform selectable portions. This is all if you're going for realistic-like proportions.
another thing to note, if you are, is he is leaning a hellavu lot for the spacing/placement of his feet. I'd nab the foot in the front, tug it forward so that he looked balanced. Otherwise if you were going for the "potential topple," you really got the suggestion he can flop over any second. As stated, all the pieces are really accurate in the drawing, just the size relations need to be tweaked.
Thank you so much! I love critique!
You're completely right with your diagnosis.
I think I got a little too close with the individual
parts and neglected to take a step back and make
sure it's all working together. I just need a
monstrous amount of practice with life drawing.
I doubt I'll come back to fix this, but you keep
the lessons in mind for the future, right? =]
He completely looks like he's going to topple. >_<
I was trying to go for a really strained stretch.
I could throw tiny wings on him and "fix" it. xD
You're completely right with your diagnosis.
I think I got a little too close with the individual
parts and neglected to take a step back and make
sure it's all working together. I just need a
monstrous amount of practice with life drawing.
I doubt I'll come back to fix this, but you keep
the lessons in mind for the future, right? =]
He completely looks like he's going to topple. >_<
I was trying to go for a really strained stretch.
I could throw tiny wings on him and "fix" it. xD
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