
Baby Lemonade with baby piano and strange ending. Not sure what got into me to submit this third On the Offensive song, but it just occured to me that this might secretly be a great performance. ;)
In the sad town
Cold iron hands clap
The party of clowns outside
Rain falls in grey far away
Please please baby lemonade
In the evening
Sun going down when
The Earth streams in in the morning
Send a cage through the post
Make your name like a ghost
Please please baby lemonade
I'm screaming
I met you this way
You're nice to me like ice
In the clock they sent through a washing machine
Come around make it soon so alone
Please please baby lemonade
(nanananalalananalalablablananablalala; verse 1; verse2)
In the sad town
Cold iron hands clap
The party of clowns outside
Rain falls in grey far away
Please please baby lemonade
In the evening
Sun going down when
The Earth streams in in the morning
Send a cage through the post
Make your name like a ghost
Please please baby lemonade
I'm screaming
I met you this way
You're nice to me like ice
In the clock they sent through a washing machine
Come around make it soon so alone
Please please baby lemonade
(nanananalalananalalablablananablalala; verse 1; verse2)
Category Music / 60s
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 104px
File Size 8.26 MB
I was listening to this whilst doing some mindless antique ornamented letter writing! Well, this lasted quite a while less than the time it took me to finish writing it,
but let us say never mind,
and board ye on every side! :D
The introduction was wonderful! If it weren't for the repetition of the base note, I could imagine it as a sort of theme to a fugue, though the way you continue reminds me more of those really free preludes of the renaissance! When you bring in the awesome-piano I love the rhythms, they're so... sick (in a good way, they make me feel rather uneasy!). Oh, and the first nananana part is great! I'm kind of wishing it were an octave lower, but I guess that's the pneumatic influenza talking.
(P.S. work on your screaming! Imagine me hitting you with a tiorba or better yet, your best friend's fist.)
but let us say never mind,
and board ye on every side! :D
The introduction was wonderful! If it weren't for the repetition of the base note, I could imagine it as a sort of theme to a fugue, though the way you continue reminds me more of those really free preludes of the renaissance! When you bring in the awesome-piano I love the rhythms, they're so... sick (in a good way, they make me feel rather uneasy!). Oh, and the first nananana part is great! I'm kind of wishing it were an octave lower, but I guess that's the pneumatic influenza talking.
(P.S. work on your screaming! Imagine me hitting you with a tiorba or better yet, your best friend's fist.)
Well, I'm glad to hear you were at least well enough to do some letter ornamentation or somesuch artistic busy-thing.
I must say I'm partial to these progressions and the way they work. The entire point in making them work here lies in a halfway bad, halfway calmly good delivery. The ending pseudo-wail is the climax of that, but I understand why you'd think it a scream.
12-8 years ago I only screamed (bar the opera type singing), but sadly noone told me that to scream well tonally you should first know how to sing. But anyway, that's not what I sound like when I scream. Basically, I was torturing my voice while I exhaled softly. In fact, this entire vocal is quite a bit softer than my speaking voice but uttered straight into the microphone while the guitar was actually more than twice as loud - which meant I couldn't actually hear myself and was left to imagining myself as a strangely emotional subterranean creature that doesn't transmit sound outside of shaking walls from it's tunnels.
Maybe I should've gone a bit lower there in the break though, but I'm glad you like it. :)
I must say I'm partial to these progressions and the way they work. The entire point in making them work here lies in a halfway bad, halfway calmly good delivery. The ending pseudo-wail is the climax of that, but I understand why you'd think it a scream.
12-8 years ago I only screamed (bar the opera type singing), but sadly noone told me that to scream well tonally you should first know how to sing. But anyway, that's not what I sound like when I scream. Basically, I was torturing my voice while I exhaled softly. In fact, this entire vocal is quite a bit softer than my speaking voice but uttered straight into the microphone while the guitar was actually more than twice as loud - which meant I couldn't actually hear myself and was left to imagining myself as a strangely emotional subterranean creature that doesn't transmit sound outside of shaking walls from it's tunnels.
Maybe I should've gone a bit lower there in the break though, but I'm glad you like it. :)
Repeat listening? Should I feel a bit nervous now? :3 Personally I like both approaches because they're actually different.. can't beat Syd at being Syd afterall. I like doing some eccentric stuff, but it's not all a good idea. First intent was to do the intro acoustic and the rest with triple-layered electric guitars.. what foolishness!
Hehe, I do think you're required to like that piano to enjoy this! And I guess you'll be happy to know that this intro is the 'short' version, the long version has a ~2 minute jazz jam after the first part and a double length second part. But who really has time for a song after such an onslought? :D
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