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meow eats a giant sub (GONE WRONG) (2/2) [patron reward]
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Category Artwork (Digital) / Fat Furs
Species Alien (Other)
Size 782 x 798px
File Size 554 kB
Overall, I think the sequence was really good! The two panels are honestly great, and I love the gut in this one.
My one thing is that, for something like this, I'd def say there would prob be a third that's like, them lounging around and regretting actually eating the last bite.
'Course, I know it was limited due to it being a patreon reward. Otherwise, I love it!
My one thing is that, for something like this, I'd def say there would prob be a third that's like, them lounging around and regretting actually eating the last bite.
'Course, I know it was limited due to it being a patreon reward. Otherwise, I love it!
it was "limited" because the patron only wanted the second part of the picture
i went out my way to do the first part of the sequence just so there can be an actual 'cause -> effect' with why he was "bloated after eating a giant sub"
i felt like the pic would be more empty without something actually showing him before he ate something because him just being fat/bloated vs. being bloated after eating the big fuck off sub; clearly the latter is more interesting to look at
if i were to add extra to this, i would've put a panel inbetween the first and last and have him actually eating the sub -- that would make it more complete and play into the "cause -> effect" thing i mentioned before
i went out my way to do the first part of the sequence just so there can be an actual 'cause -> effect' with why he was "bloated after eating a giant sub"
i felt like the pic would be more empty without something actually showing him before he ate something because him just being fat/bloated vs. being bloated after eating the big fuck off sub; clearly the latter is more interesting to look at
if i were to add extra to this, i would've put a panel inbetween the first and last and have him actually eating the sub -- that would make it more complete and play into the "cause -> effect" thing i mentioned before
Ahhh, fair enough! I didn't know that the reward was only for one panel.
But I get that- them eating the sub is another thing that would've also fit in. None the less, I would still say it's really good without an in-between panel, since the first one sets up the second one.
I'll still say tho, this is def one of my favorite pieces of yours.
But I get that- them eating the sub is another thing that would've also fit in. None the less, I would still say it's really good without an in-between panel, since the first one sets up the second one.
I'll still say tho, this is def one of my favorite pieces of yours.
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