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The page has a black outline on purpose as well as the next page. Sorry if it's a little confusing, I wanted to show what was going on here in a bit of a surreal way and not super straight forward or drowning you in inner thoughts. Plus it's always better when you come to your own conclusions.
Hopefully the next page will clear it up some more.
I tried to recreate the feel of an Ozu film with the last frame.
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>The page has a black outline on purpose as well as the next page. Sorry if it's a little confusing, I wanted to show what was going on here in a bit of a surreal way and not super straight forward or drowning you in inner thoughts. Plus it's always better when you come to your own conclusions.
Hopefully the next page will clear it up some more.
I tried to recreate the feel of an Ozu film with the last frame.
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Wait a minute... in the first panel, there's clearly another pair of antlers next to Louis... and in the last panel, Louis is sitting alone...
Ooooh, the part where he's presenting Legosi with the tickets is all in his imagination? Something that he'd like to have happen, but isn't able to bring him to do? If that's the case, then this page is *saaaaaaaaaaad*.
Louis is imaging himself laughing and happy, wrapped in the arms of a wolf who adores him... while in reality, the young deer sits alone, surrounded by darkness, unable to fulfill his desire...
Ooooh, the part where he's presenting Legosi with the tickets is all in his imagination? Something that he'd like to have happen, but isn't able to bring him to do? If that's the case, then this page is *saaaaaaaaaaad*.
Louis is imaging himself laughing and happy, wrapped in the arms of a wolf who adores him... while in reality, the young deer sits alone, surrounded by darkness, unable to fulfill his desire...
Yes, you did wonderfully with the whole "show don't tell" technique! The last page was confusing, but this page clears it all up, especially if you pay close enough attention. Heh heh, I can't help but feel a little smug when I look through the other comments; I don't know if anybody else noticed the same thing. XD
But again, I like that you decided to use imagery instead of words. That's one thing I dislike about some comics, where the characters or text have to explain *every* *single* *detail* in *every* *single* *panel*. I like your usage of "ma" so far.
I shall not worry! Instead, I shall look forward to each new section of pages you release. x3
But again, I like that you decided to use imagery instead of words. That's one thing I dislike about some comics, where the characters or text have to explain *every* *single* *detail* in *every* *single* *panel*. I like your usage of "ma" so far.
I shall not worry! Instead, I shall look forward to each new section of pages you release. x3
That means so much to hear, thaaaank you <3 And yeah that was what I wanted here with imagery instead of someone explaining everything they feel, especially if it's something weighing heavy of them a lot of the time people won't go into detail even with themselves or in some cases deny it all together that there is a problem. Plus, showing stuff with images or being a little vague is much better for me because it lets people come to their own conclusions better and with more nuance like you did ^^. That way not just one version is correct. Of course I am always worried it can become unreadable, so just a lil for now :3
Like the contrast between cold and lonely Louis compared to happy and playful Louis as he's around his big loving wolf.
I also very much like how you placed in the two Louis's for emphasis of his feelings, lonely Louis just out of earshot.
Louis is so cute as it looks like he's trying not to get pulled into Legoshi's cuddling and uses a nose bop technique, very effective.
Then the last two panels are too adorable from laughing Louis, to that you can spot the tops of Fudge's ears peeking over the sofa and his cute bushy tail.
I also very much like how you placed in the two Louis's for emphasis of his feelings, lonely Louis just out of earshot.
Louis is so cute as it looks like he's trying not to get pulled into Legoshi's cuddling and uses a nose bop technique, very effective.
Then the last two panels are too adorable from laughing Louis, to that you can spot the tops of Fudge's ears peeking over the sofa and his cute bushy tail.
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