A little line art i did. Tell me waht ya think!
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Cheetah
Size 1280 x 1149px
File Size 146.4 kB
My very first impression is that his legs are tangled up (or crossed?) in some fashion. Closer study, I guess he really is sort of twisted around somehow (maybe some shading would help?). I'm seeing the front of his chest and face, (angle of chest and face seem to agree). But then
his hips are turned so I'm seeing the back of his hips and base of his tail. Between his chest and hips the angle of his body has turned 90 degrees! Then I guess it's his left hip and left leg that are in the picture's foreground- Something about the angle of the leg and hip/torso don't seem to go together comfortably. Cheetahs are flexible; he'd have to be, but this looks painful! Facial features, upper body look good. Needs at least a few spots?
his hips are turned so I'm seeing the back of his hips and base of his tail. Between his chest and hips the angle of his body has turned 90 degrees! Then I guess it's his left hip and left leg that are in the picture's foreground- Something about the angle of the leg and hip/torso don't seem to go together comfortably. Cheetahs are flexible; he'd have to be, but this looks painful! Facial features, upper body look good. Needs at least a few spots?
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Thanks!
I agree. But the Arm kinda messed up the perspective for the wisted abdamon. And the leg... Duno... Kinda had a hard time making it look like its the right leg and not the left. Hmmmm. The Shorts kinda made it look weird. Ya i need to work on form a little.
Thank! ^^d
Thanks!
I agree. But the Arm kinda messed up the perspective for the wisted abdamon. And the leg... Duno... Kinda had a hard time making it look like its the right leg and not the left. Hmmmm. The Shorts kinda made it look weird. Ya i need to work on form a little.
Thank! ^^d
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