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Hereeeee she is! I finally finished her tonite- wasted no less than *3* sheets of my nice bristol trying to colour her right...but i think its worth it. Before i get the obvious critiques- keep in mind i tried to scan this and it didn't work, so this is a photo i took and tried to clean up in gimp, so the shading on her face and rest of her body is a LOT less apparent in here, altho it IS meant to be very lite, as he wanted her to have WHITE skin.
She's got silver hair and gold eyes in you can't see and that sun on her cheek is a birthmark. I'm rather proud of her hair and her shirt especially, i thought i shaded that rather well <3
Haven't heard Dean's (the person who commissioned it) comments on it yet, but i'll mention it in my journal later >^.^< or i'll try to remember to.
In case anyone's curious, this beauty went for $20canadian, and it is 9"x12"
Other than the obvious problems with the photo, tips and critiques are welcome >^.^<
Busty is copyright Dean White, but the picture is copyright Sanura Mosi
She's got silver hair and gold eyes in you can't see and that sun on her cheek is a birthmark. I'm rather proud of her hair and her shirt especially, i thought i shaded that rather well <3
Haven't heard Dean's (the person who commissioned it) comments on it yet, but i'll mention it in my journal later >^.^< or i'll try to remember to.
In case anyone's curious, this beauty went for $20canadian, and it is 9"x12"
Other than the obvious problems with the photo, tips and critiques are welcome >^.^<
Busty is copyright Dean White, but the picture is copyright Sanura Mosi
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 600 x 922px
File Size 66.8 kB
beautiful work, kitten! you've captured the pose quite nicely.
okay, critique time!
*cracks knuckles*
hehe, just kidding ;)
but the first thing i notice, is that her right cheek has an emblem on it... this is cool and all, but we can't see it. it's a notable point upon this particular character, so being able to see if might be a good idea. nexttime, i might stuggest turning her to face the other direction. but this is really a minor point. ^^
her collar looks nice and shiney, like black leather, so that's good ^^
the hair is daring there, comming down not just in back, but forward too! though, the hair that falls infront of her breasts should curve more. i dont' know if you have long hair yourself or not.. but if you do, try posing like that in the mirror, and look at how your hair curves. if you don't have long hair, drape a blanket-end over your shoulder and bust like that. :)
you've done a very nice job with the shading/highlighting of her dress on her body, i don't see anything about it that would need adjusting ^..^
overall, you've done a great job on this pic, Sanura! *huggles* ^..^
okay, critique time!
*cracks knuckles*
hehe, just kidding ;)
but the first thing i notice, is that her right cheek has an emblem on it... this is cool and all, but we can't see it. it's a notable point upon this particular character, so being able to see if might be a good idea. nexttime, i might stuggest turning her to face the other direction. but this is really a minor point. ^^
her collar looks nice and shiney, like black leather, so that's good ^^
the hair is daring there, comming down not just in back, but forward too! though, the hair that falls infront of her breasts should curve more. i dont' know if you have long hair yourself or not.. but if you do, try posing like that in the mirror, and look at how your hair curves. if you don't have long hair, drape a blanket-end over your shoulder and bust like that. :)
you've done a very nice job with the shading/highlighting of her dress on her body, i don't see anything about it that would need adjusting ^..^
overall, you've done a great job on this pic, Sanura! *huggles* ^..^
thank you! >^.^< i'm very flattered and yes very proud of the picture. my recent training in rendering really helped for the shirt
Now, the emblem on her cheek? that's a sun symbol, and it was an afterthought, its not so important that it warrented me posing her to show it off, it was better for the pose to look natural rather than her showing off her birth mark (which is what the mark IS, so its more or less like posing to show off a mole on your face >^.~<) But i did get your point
Thanks about the hair! i ended up doing it long, and i knew i wanted it to drape along the breast to show what hair really would do if you were turned like that to look at something, but i'll definitely keep that in mind when i do this sorta thing another time!
Oh and the black stuff- supposed to be a Dark brown, *tilts her head* but i suppose it would be leather.
Now, the emblem on her cheek? that's a sun symbol, and it was an afterthought, its not so important that it warrented me posing her to show it off, it was better for the pose to look natural rather than her showing off her birth mark (which is what the mark IS, so its more or less like posing to show off a mole on your face >^.~<) But i did get your point
Thanks about the hair! i ended up doing it long, and i knew i wanted it to drape along the breast to show what hair really would do if you were turned like that to look at something, but i'll definitely keep that in mind when i do this sorta thing another time!
Oh and the black stuff- supposed to be a Dark brown, *tilts her head* but i suppose it would be leather.
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