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The first part to The New Real World novel. This sets the tone for most of the book. Nothing to special or exciting.
Its the story of a husky tamai named Kyr, living his life peacefully in fandrea town. He has a good home and freinds. But as he goes on new odd things start to happen and he learns the thr truth.
Please tell me honestly what you think! I will NOT take "it was good" as an answer! And comments from nonwatchers welcome!
Ill make a simple image for the story later.
Its the story of a husky tamai named Kyr, living his life peacefully in fandrea town. He has a good home and freinds. But as he goes on new odd things start to happen and he learns the thr truth.
Please tell me honestly what you think! I will NOT take "it was good" as an answer! And comments from nonwatchers welcome!
Ill make a simple image for the story later.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 67 kB
Very nice story and I can see Rikux and Dawn from the first Fandrea story got marrid to each other like many had predicted.
Looks like Kyr doesn't want to admint that he has feelings for Lonfa and she might have the same feelings for him.
How much trouble did mayor Kirux get himself it to with that one mistak at dinnr that night?
Looks like Kyr doesn't want to admint that he has feelings for Lonfa and she might have the same feelings for him.
How much trouble did mayor Kirux get himself it to with that one mistak at dinnr that night?
And like most horror movies you'll start with the funny guy and pick them off until its just the hot guy and hot girl. If I were you Id start with the hot guy because he usually kills the monster.
Control time?........ Oh yeah.... He can do that cant he? That was in the beginning when I made him like a lower god. Yeah I guess hes deadly. Maye I should work some more on that....
Control time?........ Oh yeah.... He can do that cant he? That was in the beginning when I made him like a lower god. Yeah I guess hes deadly. Maye I should work some more on that....
I think usually they just take a silver piece of jewelry and cram it into the wolf's flesh. Mabye take out the one with the most jewelry.
Well... I have like two more parts that I have yet to submit BUT the end on an even bigger cliffhanger and I dont know if Im gonna write past that.
Well... I have like two more parts that I have yet to submit BUT the end on an even bigger cliffhanger and I dont know if Im gonna write past that.
Well spioled kids get taken out pretty early. And dont worry about the funny guy, he's a coward and easy to take down.
No, no, no. I have two more parts written. I think it'd take like 5-7 more parts to end it were I want. But since I have writers block I guess I could edit the next two and submit.
No, no, no. I have two more parts written. I think it'd take like 5-7 more parts to end it were I want. But since I have writers block I guess I could edit the next two and submit.
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