Last panel seems a little dry. Maybe he should lean into the swing a bit more. Or it could be the fabric. Other then that, I likes.

It'll make more sense in the next page. It's supposed to be a little... shy on overt action.

Did I miss something? It looks like it went from page 3 to page 15, what happened to everything in between?

I collected them in order here. Sorry for the confusion. You joined the story already in progress.

Very well done. (Caught up with the awesome)

Thanks. The reason some of you guys only saw the first three pages and then page 15 is: Around New Year's I ran into a problem with the story and where it was going. I had gotten up to pg 12 by that point. I had to rewrite part of the story and it changed this page. Look through my gallery and you can still see the original "page 12" and it blocked me pretty well. I took some time off and rethought things. Now I'm back on the story and I caught it all up to where it needs to be.

The glowing effect with Friday's eyes is great. The way the vampire is falling in the bottom panal looks a little off, but you said above it'll make more sense in the next page.

Yeah, it's a real "WAIT FOR IT!" kinda thing.

i said blood makes em quick not smart. perfect.

Thanks.

gotta be arare quote there.

Quote?

i think ya made yo own quote there.

Ah. I thought you were saying I quoted somebody.

nah, not that, im sayin ya intervented yer own.

I think I'd understand you better if you spoke English when you addressed me.

If English is your second language, then, okay. At least you're trying, but, if not, damn, son. Speak English or don't speak it. Half assed English and intentional illiterate-speak don't float in my headspace.

i is speakin english and it aint ma second language. i caint spel right so fuck off

It sure seems like it is. So until you can converse coherently, you fuck off. Some of us have better things to do than decipher your "english."

wel it aint my falt if i got somthin wrong in ma head, so stop rapn me bout it.